Well done with the few exceptions where you somehow slip between third person and first person narrative.

Got to love that TARDIS.

Oooooo, clifie. XD

I absolutely love this. It's light and (though confusing at points) beautiful

This line utterly...WHAM! my heart though: "But with us… sometimes he's my husband, but I'm not his wife, and sometimes I'm his wife but he's… he's not my husband." Their time lines are all over the place and even though it's interesting an all that, it's so heartbreakingly sad.

I also realllly, really love the ending!

This fic is good, I like to think if River and Rose meet theyll gonna be alright with each other.

this was really sweet! :D

I always love it when someone is mature enough to acknowledge that a character has a romantic past and future without issues. Both women are so in character and over all very well written piece