Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Jan

I did put the dialouge in spaces, i keep to my grammar. it was ff.nets fault, tis has done it b4. the bloody thing. (I even criticise the bible grammar) i also rember it being longer... cruious very cruious

Well it was an interesting chapter. I didn't like how you cluttered the dialoge to together. It's much easier to read with spaces. And also I think you very much rushed it. Well at least you're continuing on the story. Keep it up.

You didn't tell me that you updated you bad girl, *pouts*. I still can't believe ya killed Sev, but at least Ron got it *manic laughter* i like the hard hearted twins they sound very hot

oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! O.O RON IS DEAD! AH! First Snape, then ron! AHHHHHH! SNAPPIE DIED! ::sniffs:: how could you! AHHHHH! this story is SOOOOOO Great! WOHOO! CONGRATS! CONTINUE SOON please! THanks, ta ta luck to you! Steph

omg... (I can't beleive I didn't cry, I'm all dried up, I came close to it though, my eyes are all tingling) Aww no, sevvie... I love my sevvie so much, he, he can't die now, can he? NO Harry must bring him back before he goes TOO dead NOO sevvie! But but! Someone really gotta tell Eliza the story, and I think harry should. Oh wow this is a really good fic! wohoo! Damn you ron! you asshole! ::ehem:: sorry:: just ron shouldn't be soo traitor like! and hermione died! NOO! man, poor harry, I would be going insane soon if I were him! Wow this fic is really great! Continue soon! Steph

what was the point of that chapter! I'm sorry but your chapters are really short. Could you do something with the next one please!

I love it. Keep going i love this stor

y so much

I can't believe you killed Snape, urgh, u killed my fav character, *Cries* u have to do something to bring him back, make him a ghost or something. Poor poor Sev. Really well written though.

This is such a good story! I love it! But why would Snape go by himself? Why wouldn't everyone else go with him? And how dumb is Harry? Even I knew Snape wouldn't really give him poison. Okay, maybe not, but...okay nevermind. Please continue this story!

NO WAYYYYY! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE! I can't beleive it! You're not really going to kill Harry are you? Please write as soon as you can!

P.S.

Good job, except for the clifhanger ending of course! j/k

OOOOOOOH. Well done, I like. Your chapters are alot longer than mine!

yuck. Post more soon please!

Oh, this is SO good! I just read the whole thing and I think it's wonderful. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :D Keep up the good work ;)

Okay it got pretty good after the first two chapters. Please write more soon.