awwwww! cute cute cute cute cute cute CUUUUUTEEEEE! XD

Daw...gotta love the fluff... :)

Love,
Razor

Aw...Dante! Don't go! Nero wants you to stay!

Once again, the summary alone has captured my interest X)

Love,
Razor

Love this! I have to agree with Dante, Nero is HOT!

This story is funny and sweet. I wish this acually happened in the games!

X Jade X

naww cute XD

Totaly loved this story

Lol, these two always make me laugh when acting shy... especially Dante! he seems so clumsy when trying to show Nero how he feels...

But then again... thye kissed! something good (I hope) will be happening soon, lol! (that, or Nero will kick Dante's ass XDD)

Take care and good luck!

Interesting beginning, but I do have some constructive criticism for you. When a new person starts talking, you should always begin a new paragraph so that no one is confused-or at least less confused on who's speaking XD like this:

"Dante? Dante...? DUDE!" Nero yelled.

"Wha?"

That way it's more clear and easy to read. Also you have a couple of spelling mistakes, the one I really noticed was just you spelled 'straight' as 'strait.' Anyway, I can't wait to see what you do with it and I hope you keep improving!

Bitbyboth

Lol, they act so dumb... they should be honest with eachother! But, I think, it's funnier this way...

I'll wait for the update!