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Reviews for: The Next Step (False Start II)
Terry Kay 8/23/09 . chapter 7
Both of theses stories are so well woven around and through the originals that I get the feeling that if the show had come out in the 90's instead of the early 80's that these would have been the actual episodes! Thank you!
amanda 4/20/02 . chapter 7
great very sweet and warm ending i like that
kitty kat7 4/18/02 . chapter 7
that was great! i totally enjoyed every chapter! are there any more in the works, hmmm? no pushing, though. btw, loved the ending!
Mindy Lane 4/18/02 . chapter 7
While I treasure the originals, your AU scenario is certainly interesting. You've crafted your stories in a way that makes them credible if one can make the leap beyond what we know about our beloved characters. Thanks for a fun read!
Sarah S 4/17/02 . chapter 7
Great ending, Ann! I can't WAIT for Saved By The Bells in the False Start Universe!
Heart-Pendant 4/17/02 . chapter 1
I love seeing this side of Lee much better! I loved how you closed this chapter.

I hope there is more on the way! I've thoroughly enjoyed the whole story!

Thank you for sharing it with us.
Momm2five 4/16/02 . chapter 6
ROFL! How cute.

I'm still really enjoying this, Ann! LOL! Each chapter is getting better and better. He grovelled well :o)

Waiting *patiently*
Sarah S 4/14/02 . chapter 4
Wow...this is really great,Ann! I think the temperature in the room where I'm reading this suddenly rose 10 degrees. I can only imagine the "fantasy" Amanda is having now about a particular secret agent...;)
Momm2five 4/14/02 . chapter 4
Ok, I'm definitely in the *they waited* camp BUT (ºÜº) I am thouroughly enjoying this. They way you are writing this is pretty believeable! And they way you're using what actually happened and weaving it into your universe is great!

I can't wait to read the rest!

Thank you for your notes and explainations at the beginning. They laid everything right out as to what to expect. Seems some people need to pay attention to them.

Wonderfully written!
Retro 4/14/02 . chapter 4
The story is nice. Your wording and descriptions are lovely.

Your use of the word "throng" twice in two chapters caught my attention, though, as I really don't hear it used much in everyday life. It's also just a little bit hard to imagine all this happening so early in their relationship. However, I think you've done a very good job in making a situation as unbelieveable as this believeable.
Gloria 4/14/02 . chapter 3
Can't wait for the rest! Keep it coming! :)
Sarah S 4/13/02 . chapter 2
Ann...I've been waiting to see if you'd continue the "False Start" universe. This is good so far, definitely in character for both of them...keep it coming!
lj 4/13/02 . chapter 1
absolutely ludicrous idea. The first day indeed! Would never work! Not on the first day! Never in a million years! No one could make that believable. But then my twisted little mind started to think ... what about the second day ...

Your sick.
kitty kat7 4/13/02 . chapter 2
great story. i just read 'false start' right before i read this one and enjoyed it very much. i was glad to that this was a continuation. can't wait for the next part!
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