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   Scarheart of DarkClan 7/19/11 . chapter 3I have grown a great deal of respect for Larkwing. She isn't my favorite, but I enjoy her past. I hope everything works out for her. The whole part with the thrush was fun to read. I have decided Rabbitspring can go on my loved characters list. I'm hoping I can see more of him. This isn't anything like you first time around. This is way better. |
| DauntlessFlame 7/17/11 . chapter 2 Ugh! Now you got me momentariley feeling sorry for Ashkit! I almost DON'T feel sorry for Mintkit BECAUSE she has Rosekit/Rosefeather. This is definatly better (so far) than the older copy. keep updating! |
| Coqui's Song 7/17/11 . chapter 2 I wonder what Rosefeather -er, Rosekit- has on her agenda... Coqui's Song |
| Coqui's Song 7/17/11 . chapter 1 I'm so interested... I saw this around, and I'm very sorry to say I was too lazy to start reading it. XD Coqui's Song |
| skyfoot21 7/16/11 . chapter 2 UPDATE. Now. |
| XxBlazestormxX 7/16/11 . chapter 2 That's nice, how you're showing how Ashkit used to actually try to include Mintkit in everything, and so did Windkit before everyone noticed how weird Mintkit is. I really love this story! And i lovfe how you update daily. I havn't updated in a loooong time, but thats cuz of writers block at the wrong times (like in the summer, when i actually have opertunities to write!) |
| Last to Cross 7/16/11 . chapter 2 Aw, that was so sweet and sad about Ashkit. This is a lot better (no offense), it flows better, events seem more natural, and I'm glad we get to see what everything was like before she's a freak. |
| Satan Abraham 7/16/11 . chapter 2 Ashkit was just being nice. Stupid Minty. xD |
| Giggles Just Giggles 7/16/11 . chapter 2 hahahahahahahahaha omg this is funny lol hahaha |
| The-Great-Miss-Y 7/16/11 . chapter 2 This is a very nice story, mysterious yet touching, please update |
| Scarheart of DarkClan 7/16/11 . chapter 2 Wow, this is so different from the original version. I love seeing Mintkit being a normal kit, even if it is short lived. She is so sweet and uncoprutpeted. Rosekit is even more evil that the last. She is actually telling Mintkit this. She is an over confident little thing. The whole talk with Rabbitspring and Larkwing was so totally depressing. I really wanted to hug themand tell them I love them. I can't believe you forgot Larkwing in the last story, but I'm glad you remembered. I'm really liking this. Go Sleetkit! I have decided that he is my favorite character. |
| R.L. Sisters 7/16/11 . chapter 2 It's much, much better than your first try at chapter one. Keep up the good work and you'll do great! |
| Bluestar4ever 7/16/11 . chapter 1 I like it so far! Please update! |
| Praise You In The Storm 7/16/11 . chapter 1 I sure hope you're not planning on deleting this. I love this story, and I want to see more stories like these :D |
| The Copycat Ninja 7/16/11 . chapter 1 Ok...What happened to the old story? Never mind that, please continue because this chapter/prologue is good :) |
