Please continue this story.

OH MY GODESSES!

Kow, this is fabulous! This is genius and it's really very original! I enjoyed the Cahill/Greek names, and yes, this does qualify as a fairytale.

I loved it. Sorry if I couldn't review sooner. Internet was down :( But I loved it!

There were only a few extremely minor grammatical mistakes. Otherwise, amazing!

Write, write, write!

Blue

Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Oh my goshness! I just loved the Cahill/Greek names! I just LOVED it! This is one of my favorite myths! I just died of excitement when I read the summary, and I wasn't disappointed! This was a fun little version of that myth, and I thought that where you placed each character was appropriate. But who was the man? McIntyre? Lolololol!

I don't know if I was supposed to laugh, but the names just made me smile. It may also be the fact that "This. Is. SPARTA!" kept going through my head when Danysus was talking. 0.o

Cc... I don't think there's any to give. There may have been a missing comma in there, but I'm not sure. I just wished that the man was identified. Thts all!

Sorry for my random giggliness earlier. I just LOVED the names!

Kittens. VANISH!

Kittens

Creative, cute, and totally describes the myth. I love Greek myths, I love how you were able to change their names (and they still sounded good), and so this will be going to my favorites! :D

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