Well, I've never heard of the "Solitary Sirens", unfortunately. Even though I don't really get it, it was still a good episode.

So DokiDoki Pretty Cure is the next crossover event? I haven't watched any DokiDoki yet, but I'm looking forward to this.

Hey, it's great to see you work on this story! And I hope that next time, there will be an actual Precure crossover.

Hmmm...at the moment, I'm not sure what series this is a tribute to. The Avengers, probably? I'm just making a guess here. Plus, Fami got beat up quite a bit in this chapter, didn't she?

Anyway, great job on this chapter!

-iheartgod175

Really good chapter, Nick-kun! I think I may have actually fallen of the bed halfway through...

CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

...Oh my GOSH, I literally had to keep myself from squeeing out loud when I read this episode summary in the author's note. Justice League cartoon FTW! Seriously, tho, Justice League (and Unlimited) is, like, one of my favorite things EVER. And this chapter was MASTERFUL. I THINK I MIGHT EXTREMELY LOVE YOU NOW. If I have any criticisms of make... well, it kinda cribbed off the dialogue of the original a liiiiiitle too much (Doremi getting Wally's lines made me crack up, tho).

The MOTHER, Power Rangers, and Marvel Comics references on the aside were a nice (if unsubtle) touch, too. Superhero fan, are you? :) We should totally chat sometime.

I'm with Hazuki-Chan all the way! The world doesn't need to make space for more shopping centers. I've watched my own town grow and change over the years, but I can never forget some of my favorite childhood places. I'm really glad Hazuki could protect the library!

Looks like a new key player has shown up. So Ayumi used to be a friend to Erika? That's very interesting.

A Fami-centric episode is next? Sweet! I'm looking forward to it!

Yay, the next entry! I read this chapter yesterday, but I didn't get to review since the keyboard is kind of messed up. This was a great chapter, and it was great to see Hazuki act bold for once. Plus, we get to meet the girl Erika remembers, and Hazuki and Nick got to kick some butt.

Looking at the Double Ojamajo Sonic Flash, it reminds me of the Twin Stream Splash from Pretty Cure Splash Star (minus the dancing of course) and the Double Ojamajo Sparkle Screw reminded me of Extreme Luminario from Pretty Cure Max Heart. Probably because Hazuki yelled "Luminous!" at the end there.

I also noticed that you placed an eyecatch in this chapter, since you did say that this rewrite was more like an anime series. It's really cute! It would be cool if you could make up new ones every few chapters, but that's just my suggestion.

Well, that's it from me. I'm looking forward to seeing Fami's episode!

-God bless, iheartgod175

SUGOI NICK-KUN!

Awesome chapter!

Please let the FLAT 4 make an appearance soon... Please...

AWESOME

Hey, it's good to see you come back with this story. This chapter is pretty good, and I like how you put in some tension between Momoko and her aunt. Also, the part where Miyoko backhanded Erika was something I didn't see coming at all, and it turned out being awesome.

...Now that I think about it, the Double Ojamajo Sparkle Screw is somewhat parallel to Cure Black and Cure White's Pretty Cure Marble Screw attack, since they both involve lightning.

I like Momoko, but my favorite Ojamajo has to be Hazuki. I can't wait to see her get some development in the next episode!

God bless, iheartgod175

Um, I'm sorry, but I agree with the guy whose name's too long for me to remember, I know Nick's the main character and all, but even Doremi-chan didn't get that much attention in the series. So could you bring the others out a little more (You're doing fine with Aiko but Onpu and Hazuki, yeah)

Just an act of criticism, I'm not a hater, I love these stories!

Loved it, I also love how Aiko and Nick constantly bicker, keep it up! (The story and Nick and Aiko's bickering)

i think is funny that this Nick doesnt like to run too fast, and the Sonic version just wants to go faster.
i think this chapter was great, especially the part of the Sparkle Screw.

Some constructive criticism:

1: Author's notes in the middle of story DO NOT WANT. They're sloppy, annoying, and interrupt the flow of the story. If you have something important to say, can't you just fit it into the "recap" at the beginning of the chapter? This also leads me to...

2: Throwing in a pointless "author's note" and ruining the flow of the scene to Author Tract and complain about something COMPLETELY unrelated to the story. And then having the characters break the fourth wall to agree with your complaining. Just... eugh. Mean-spirited, petulant, and sloppy (...and this criticism has nothing to do with my fangirlism of a certain evil, living, void-obsessed tree).

Your story CERTAINLY isn't bad, it's just... amateur. Don't take it personally; my early stuff makes you look like William Shakespeare.

I've never played Final Fantasy before, since the games don't cater to me. But that was really funny on how many shots you took on Exdeath.

As for the chapter, it was really great to see Nick's competitive side. I was rooting for him the whole time he was racing against Blake, and I was relieved to see that he won at the end. This version of Diamond and Pearl is certainly much more entertaining now with all of the character development chapters that you're adding.

Anyway, that's it from me, and great job!

-iheartgod175

Normally, I don't read yuri or yaoi, but even then, this was a pretty good chapter. I love the callbacks to the movie, and how everyone gets their own Crescendo forms. I'm pretty sure Miyuki WOULD freak out that there's another Pretty Cure team, but I think the All Stars DX New Stage took care of that.

Hmmm...we're going to have a competitor for Momoko, it seems. I wonder if he'll be a new villain who works for Morticon or just a character who passes through. That'll be up to you, I guess.

Well, that's all from me and keep up the good work!

-God bless, iheartgod175

P.S. When you get to the Max Heart crossover, I have one request, which is to make Luminous more useful. I like her, but she normally doesn't do much other than run away and get into trouble. That's my only request.

Wua! That was great! I really did like those sweet moments with Hibiki and Kanade. Makes me wanna watch the Suite Pretty Cure movie again. I look forward to the next crossover, whenever it happens.