ooookay...I'm intrigued...I'll be on the look out for more!

Hey, this is the person who wrote 'another fine mess' My computer is nuts and won't let me log in. Anyway, I've been writing since I was thirteen and I can identify good writing. THIS is good writing A) not a Mary Sue B)Good description C) Plot twists. Keep it up! I want to read more! There just so few good fanfics!

that was sooooo good!i love it! you are really good at writing! keep it up! :)

I love your story. I truly think your writing style is beautiful. Will you write more? I look forward to it.

Al

How sweet, I think I know who the woman is now, keep writing! This is excellent!

Yea! You fianally updated! Keep up the great work it seems very interesting.

Wow. I love your style of writing; you don't put a single extra word in there, but you still manage to paint this brilliant picture of exactly what you want to say in the reader's mind. What's the engagement? Why (and how, dear god) did Lefthand actually shut up? I want mooooooore! Haha. Stop reading this review and get writing!

Ok you got me interested in the story. Even though it was short it was well written. I would like to see what happens with the story in the future.

I love your descriptive style of writing, and I think I have an idea of who it is D's visiting, but I'll have to wait and find out if I'm write! Please continue with this, it's very well-written!

very, very interesting. I love the visualization of the fog like hands bit. i loved it. keep going. i'd like to read more

You are really good at writing descriptivly it was like being there. Keep up the fantastic work