 magequeen 9/29/05 . chapter 1 OMG keep ritin.. i'll be ur faithful reveiwer(jus don make too much fluff between Numair n alanna, cuz i love numair |
 Cesy 6/7/05 . chapter 2Check the facts. Alanna didn't meet Numair until well after Thom was dead, and Numair was known as Arram then. He was also a penniless street magician, hiding his power so that no-one from Carthak would kill him. Try rereading Wild Magic. |
 Queen's Own 9/20/03 . chapter 2funny story! |
 AmayaNightRain11 6/19/03 . chapter 2 this is sweet i like it |
 anonymous 6/17/03 . chapter 2 um, I thought alanna met numair when he was running from orzone...not before...and she definally didn't visit thom after she nearly died during the other visit...and after thom went to the palace he stayed there...oh well, this is your fanfic, you can make w/e you want happen... |
 anon 5/14/03 . chapter 1 Humorous ending, but I think that Alanna shouldn't have told Numair so much. I don't think she's that trusting. |
 x sunswept 2/19/03 . chapter 1*g* Hey lookit here! You like Tamora Pierce too? And LotR? *huggles* That's awesome! Great story btw, sounds very much like Alanna and Numair (*giggles* Daine's my favourite char., and then Numair!)
_ Keep it up! Oh and thanks for the reviews!
Sil |
 Kiayla 2/17/03 . chapter 1This is really good! Sorry I took so long to reply, my computer is hating me right now. anyway. I just wanted to say that the story moves a little quickly, but other than that, it's a really good explaination! I'd love to read any other TP fanfics that you may have written!
*Kiayla* |
 Lady Arabian Knight 9/25/02 . chapter 1Thats a good story! I liked it! |
 WaNdA 7/25/02 . chapter 1Hey, that's really good! I love Tamora Pierce's books! They're so awesome! |
 Shelly 5/20/02 . chapter 1 This is a good story. I would just like to know, who has stronger magic, Thom or Numair? |
 Spiffy 4/20/02 . chapter 1 Interesting... |
 Pinkpanther 4/15/02 . chapter 1Good job! |
 Katie Carr 4/14/02 . chapter 1 I realy liked the story!
you should right more. |