I really really like the message of this. I've said before, it always felt weird that they were all bad and I really like how you explain it. And just because the chapter is filler doesn't mean it isn't good. That's when you get a chance to showcase your characters and revelations like the fact that the slytherins are just trying to survive too. Very nice!

I think it is really interesting to hear Snape's perspective, especially knowing his real story.

Part of me is kind of weirded out by Slytherins being considerate with eachother. But at the same time it always bugged me how slytherins were all grr and that was all... so... this chapter makes me conflicted which I think is a good thing. So, good job for thinking of things most people wouldn't think of!

Great chapter! UPDATE!

I know you said that you aren't too happy with this chapter, but I liked it. It was very Death Eater-y... :) One thing I did notice though was that when Carrow is thinking, you say that he "watched Terry leave with a sick sense of victory." Since it's his POV, he wouldn't have felt sick about that, rather the opposite.

Also, I know that you haven't been getting too many reviews, but that doesn't mean that no one is reading it. I used to lurk for the longest of times because I felt like I didn't have anything to contribute due to not being a writer myself. Even if someone was begging for reviews I wouldn't write... I'm sure I'm not the only one who is like that. Keep up the good work!

1. It never occured to me that people would actually be proud to have detentions from the Carrows at first. Nice! And it would be Seamus... I'm guessing that's going to change after they realize what's in store.

2. I love the Luna bit :) Best character ever, and you did her real good.

3. Really good job, and THANK YOU! Noone's been updating and I was going mad with boredom, then I realized I hadn't checked this one in a bit and NEW CHAPTER! Keep up the good work!

i really like the different snippets about each a character!, im excited to read more.

Sorry it took me so long to read this... its getting better and better every chapter :) I like how everyone's worried, but for slightly different reasons. It Gives them more humanity than just names on a page. Good luck at school!

I like the longer POVs. It seems to let more character and story out. Good chapter and good luck at school!

Yay! new chapter!

The critique: you used people's eyes to show emotion 3 or 4 times in about a minutes worth of reading. It makes the reading feel a bit stumbled/awkward. Maybe if you tried using other body language for a few of them? Also, the different POV's need something separating them like you did in the first chapter.

The good: I really like that you showed Snape's POV, hoping to see some Carrow later on. Overall I think that this is going to be an interesting read, keep up the good work!

Here! one more review! I usually don't like this format (short POV's in one chapter) but they did seem to flow together real good. Hoping you post another chapter

It's really good so far, I like how you used characters that aren't really mentioned in the book much and showed their point of view. :)

I like it so far

Update soon :)

Thanks for that, I enjoyed it :) Really like how they all feel alone but will come together. I was going to suggest separating out the different people but thinking again, I'm not sure. I quite like how they run into each other, enhances the sense of togetherness, and the fact that it's all happening at the same time.