1st off GREAT FIC i love the way u have every thing going and i have a queation will ryoga learn shi shi hokodan

You get this because that son of a bithc moterfoker Elf flamed a me and called me a terrible writer! But you deserve it becuase you are terrible writer!

It is horrible. You're a loser with a lame life for writing this. your chapters are too long and too boring. Read and review my story "The get togethers?" so you can see what a real writer can do. If you're smart enough and can find my story that is **.

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Tell that bastard Elf to stop Flaming a me or I'll flame all peoples related to her in even the smallerest ways!

And you can't report a me! Anon flames are Safe and I will tell I didn't do it ** and my friendx Angel Wings-008 Will proterct me and believe what I say!

Well this is going to cause some chaos, lol

Ryoga is an absolute **, lol. 'Course, Shampoo isn't much smarter. If that happened to Ryoga when he peeped, I wonder what's going to happen to her?

*sigh*, damn, I'd hate those kinds of days

I don't think I've ever seen someone do that with Shampoo. Nice job

Then, to his desperate relief, Ranma broke the gaze and searched from side to side, probably looking for his human form. Ryoga started to slowly walk away, so as not to draw attention to himself.

*Drip* *Drip*

Ryoga spared a moment in his sneaking to watch the gasoline drip from the nozzle that the man had been holding before he had fled.

Gasoline.

He was at a gas station.

With a strange, psychotic version of "the human torch".

Oh $#!+!

(rofl, That. Was. AWESOME!)

Ryoga is a dumass, what the hell did he think she meant by he "loses control"?

This is a really good chapter, and I'm glad that SOMEBODY finally wrote him at least defending himself against SOME of Akane's **. Nice job

That was interesting

Awesome sauce. I'm thrilled to see more of this. Easily one of my three favorites of what you've got in progress right now (I think). Ramna Yagami and his cohorts are truly amusing, and their antics are proper high powered martial arts mayhem.

Only one thing really stood out. (If you know this and it was just a typo, go ahead and ignore this, yeah?) 'Yari no Hakaisha' is 'destroyer of the spear' 'Hakaisha no Yari' would be 'Spear of the Destroyer' or even 'Destroyer's Spear'. When the particle 'no' is used similar to the apostrophe and s ('s) of English the word order is actually the same in Japanese as in English. FYI.

Anyway, I was thrilled to see more of this, and I really, truly honestly don't want to wait for the next chapter. I'm eagerly anticipating it to say the least. But I have no doubt I'll enjoy whatever you put up next. Looking forward to it.


Later

Glad to see another chapter of this story. Always fun watching the chaos Ranma can get into and the fight between him and Ryoga was awesome. Vacuum blades vs purple fire. Wonder if Ranma will be able to combine those techniques. That would be utterly crazy.

Yay! Shampoo is back. This should turn things up a notch again.

great chapter.
very good fight between Ranma and Ryoga- it's good to have someone strong enough to put Ranma on the wall like that.

Looking forward to more updates from you!

Ranma is not in the level of great King Of Fighters fighters like Geese,Kaiser,Iori,Terry Bogard,etc but he is getting there. Most likely Ranma is the middle or at least close to the middle level of King Of Fighters fighters. Shampoo,Tomas,Min and the others are not even in the level in the weakest members of the King Of Fighters fighters yet but they are getting there.

This fanfic is hot!