 soymaid 12/12/04 . chapter 1Hurrah! A writer with talent! |
 Darkover 4/25/04 . chapter 1Good story! It had an entertaining plot, and the dialogue was well done-everyone sounded completely in-character. Xander's quips were especially Xanderish. Thanks for writing this story. |
 Rachel78 3/15/02 . chapter 1and this was a field trip how that is the only problem other wise BRAVO! |
 Celli 9/16/01 . chapter 1This is at least the third time I've read this, and it still makes me giggle. I love that Cordelia comes up with the "dumb idea." |
 the frog princess 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Oh, this was great. The concept itself was amusing and I particularly liked the dialogue between the main characters. You have a real feel for their lines. |
 Lucinda Perrque 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Kind of stupid, but pretty funny. |
 Pythia 4/11/00 . chapter 1 extremely humorous. |
 Hellcop 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Not bad. A very cute idea. |
 Twi 9 4/11/00 . chapter 1 You story made the characters come alive. I could picture everything that was happening. Thanks for writing it. |