Love OC fanfictions and think there should be more of them. I think that you have put yours in nicely.

Love this story! Update soon!

please more more more!
llove this *cry**sobs* *you havent posted *snif* anything 4 ages*
*cry*

I need more ;D preeeeeeeetty please update? Love this story xD she is hilarious!

UPDATE SOON!

YES! A good Layton OC fic XD I'm hoping this gets updated!

PLEASEEEE WRITE MORE! this is a really good storyy!

i am going to explade of sadness if u dont update soon so preeetyyyy preeeettttyyy please update soon and great story i realy like it !

But ( i dont know if this has bean pointed out but..) it is around the 1900's ( oh forgodssake i wish i was around then)and i dont think they knew the word bitch then or bastard buuut anyways i love the story

xxxxxxxssss me who loves the story or just meee

I really like this story! Like, really, really like it! :) I haven't played curious village yet, but I'm not too worried about spoilers. I like the relationship Sawyer and Hershel have going on, it's cute. Hopefully it will progress into more soon. :D

Please update soon? Pretty, pretty please?

Awesome story- I can't wait to read more! Keep going! I love how they're both so oblivious.

This is great! Brilliant story and I really hope that you update soon! Loving the fact that she's so oblivious. Keep going!

Luna

Hey! I like your fanfiction. I hope, you will update soon! :-)

I love this story! You have to continue soon or else I may die from lack of such an awesome story. Grammar/spelling wise I found a few mistakes but nothing too bad. The dialogue could use some work though. The Professor Layton games take place in the early 1900s so they wouldn't have used, much less known, any cuss words. I understand it's your story but I just felt the need to gently point that out.

a very nice chapter if you ask me...

Oh my god this is great! Keep going!

wonderful!