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| Progos 2008-09-22 ch 3, | abuse*AWE* It's hard to compare fics that are all so very good and all so very different, but your work rivals whydoyouneedtoknow's Dangerverse (a First Principles Harry Potter AU) in quality, complexity, and completeness. Very few authors on this site can be called Authors (think Narnian animals compared to Animals, rats versus Rats and so forth). You and whydoyouneedtoknow are Authors. I'd ask why you aren't writing original works for massive profit, but I recognise that your muse might require seeding of inspiration. |
| Rose1948 2007-05-25 ch 3, | abuseI enjoyed this one very much. I never read the Ranma 1/2 manga nor watched the anime/OAVs. However, just from the fanfic alone, I can't say that I like Akane overmuch. *chuckles* Please just write more. Your stuff is just so awesome! |
| mikebreslau 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseVery good fun, and well written as usual, but I have one nit to pick: "Her eyes picked up the subtle fabrics of his odd clothing. They looked durable, but were as finely woven and looked as soft as silk. They showed off his frame quite nicely." This is impossible to interpret. Her eyes looked durable?? I assume the fabrics (not the eyes) were finely woven and soft. I assume that the clothing (not the eyes, not the fabrics) showed off his frame. My scanning came to a full stop when I encountered this. It took a minute to decode. Please clean this up. Otherwise, well done. |
| mikebreslau 2005-09-05 ch 3, | abuseI'm sorry that gregg's stories are so long, because once I start one I can't stop until it's finished. Always a good read. |
| Delete Here 2005-04-20 ch 3, | abusebrilliant idea i love all the different races it is amazing how you have seamlessly explained everything to a point with no fallibles. i was wondering what game it was from? |
| Gundum M 2005-04-04 ch 3, | abusethat was good. if totaly silly. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-07 ch 3, | abuseGood story but I lost track several times of what was actualy going on. Seems like I flipped two pages in some parts. I liked the omake. I never would have thought of it. Of course I take my medication! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-07 ch 2, | abuseThe hammership signalled back an old Amazon saying: "Today is a good day to die, but it's a better day to get some cuddling done after the fight." Which had replaced the old saying of "Make love, make war, make cookies. Just not at the same time." You have to love the amazons. If you don't they do evil things to you! "IT WASN'T A PRAYER!" Jared shouted at the sky. "It was just an idle comment!" LOL! Before he passed out, Zen said a thank you. Clearly, there was a god. Also clearly, whatever he'd done in his life, he'd made it to the Good Place. Great ending! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-06 ch 1, | abuseTatewaki Kuno stared into the mirror, tugging at the soft firm flesh of his face. In the mirror, Akane Tendo tugged at her face in exactly the same manner. Swallowing, Kuno opened the front of his kendo outfit, looked down, and screamed. A moment later, and he had confirmed that his bokken was the only sword he had at the moment. LOL I would think he would enjoy looking at Akanes body naked. Of course not knowing if it would wear off would definately be a problem. It began to penetrate. She'd fought a monster. Not a pervert boy like those fools who tried to mug her, not an idiot like Kuno, not a white slaver. A real live monster. And she'd been kicking its butt! Akane fainted but she had a grin on her face that would have required surgery to remove. That was priceless. Akane the pervert slayer! (1) Animal appears courtesy of Jim Henson and the Muppet Show. The humiliation of being defeated by a muppet furthers the Kuno hatred of Ranma beyond even canon levels. As far as I know there is no force in the universe that can stop Animal. Well . . . Maybe Miss Piggy. "Don't go to the dwarves for answer, for they will tell you they don't know, don't care, and will likely throw a party to celebrate this attitude. On second thought, maybe you *do* want to go to the dwarves..." -Selman the Halfling, "An Adventurer's Guide To Shadar" 851 6th Age. An attitude I admire. Let's drink to the dwarves! Hell let's just drink period! Great first chapter. I didn't think I would enjoy Ranma as a mage but I like the way this is going. |
| Yami Bite Yumi Me Chan 2002-10-27 ch 1, | abuseinterestin and this is a really great story |
| Tom 2001-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, wow, wow, wow, wow, WOW! That was REALLY good. I love stories like this! Everybody should read this, and make others just like it. Well, actually that would make it pretty boring. On second thought, just be this original. |
| magma 2001-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm so stupid! Wonderful work, and it's been right under my nose. :sniff: Well, I've read it on other sites, but I can't believe I forgot to review it once I became an author. :bows to the almighty creator of the Bet in awe and respect before leaving: Ja ne! ^_^ |
| Lee A. Hollensteiner 2001-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI greatly enjoyed the story and have copied it on my hard drive. I like the idea of Ranma being something other than an ignorant jock with no abilities other than martial arts. I tend to prefer a Ranma who is more diversified. I also found most amusing that Kasumi became the primary wife with two princeses and other asorted combat specialists defering to her. Finally, I am a sucker for a happy ending. Even though Akane did not get Ranma she still had a happy and good life. I definately can see Nabiki as a copper dragon. You did really well. Keep up the good work. |
| untitled 2001-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abusereally kewl! it was great fanfic. i hope i get to read more of it :) |
| Karen 2001-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood, this one should be continue. |