Okay well nice job. I like it! I think this story is going to be great. As for ideas, I think you should make this kind of a harsh starting relationship with kakuzu in the future. Nice first chapter. I think this story will go far And another idea is you give us a chapter were he turns into a Jashinist. That would be great!

Wow nice story _

Poor Hidan! :'( I hope he is okay! I dont want him to be upset! Can't wait for more! Update soon please!