|Reviews for Icha Icha Succedaneum|
| Amrun 2/21/13 . chapter 1
Cute premise. I loved them fighting in the beginning.
| rebecca 12/19/12 . chapter 1
Whoa. Well written.
| Bella 12/6/12 . chapter 1
| redstipulations 10/21/12 . chapter 1
I loved it. Thank you:D
| jro08 9/5/12 . chapter 1
I love this pairing the most. I like how you developed Sakura's feelings though the Icha Icha book. There was still a lightness to it as well. Thank you for the great story.
| 1CarinoInu 9/1/12 . chapter 1
Such a beautiful one shot. Well done and thoughtful.
| TheSilverMirror 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Cool. I never realized that such a pairing could potentially work out until I read this fic. 14 years isn't really that long of a time-span when you consider human sexuality. Males typically become sexually mature at a later age than females anyway. Thus, from a biological standpoint, marrying/dating older men makes sense for humans.
In this situation, after reading this piece, I kind of realize that for a group in this sort of situation, the sexual tension probably increases dramatically once the adrenaline rush is gone. Kakashi's group since the beginning of the show goes through lots of things. Sakura likely had to obtain emotional support from someone. Naruto at the time was always bouncing around from one end of the globe to the next, trying to solve problems, gaining skills and making a name for himself. In that time period, it would make sense if Kakashi had to act as her mentor in a lot of ways, thus creating a situation that (no Sasuke, Sai's suspicious since he's associated with Root)...
I find the topic you explore in this piece, about women and popular myths concerning women and consumerism of erotic literature interesting as well. Modern day erotic art often focuses solely on male interests, and not only that, male perverse interests to the exclusion of the feminine side of sexuality.
(I could practically do a dissertation on this, although I think someone might have done such a thing already)
Anyway. Loved the story. You're a good writer. _
| ChibiCHICKENluver 8/6/12 . chapter 1
this was so good omfg. i can't even describe my love for this
| KunaiWriter 6/19/12 . chapter 1
This story was terribly addicting. A
| Inume-blue 5/16/12 . chapter 1
I love it! the characters are wonderfull and well spoken. it is a very realistic aproach to a Kakashi/Sakura paring. it's one of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading. And I've read alot. man it gave me chills. such a great story. I love it the way it is yet I'm so sad it's over. I'd love to read more if you have some ;) keep up the amazing work.
| coolsville times 2/25/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this and I thank you for writing it. :D
| Lightwings 12/17/11 . chapter 1
That was really nice and hot ;D
I am realative new to KakaSaku pairing but the more I read the better I like it.
Keep it up because your writing is really good.
| Fire27 11/24/11 . chapter 1
Loved it! This is my first time reading a story by you, so I'll look into the others! I like how Sakura wasn't shy and blushing.
| Kuroda Taishi 11/17/11 . chapter 1
So I read your Collab with Nokito and wanted to check out your stuff. I like Kakashi and didn't want a multi-chapter so I started out with this.
Your writing is superb! I love all the little descriptions you put in and and the way you make the characters express their emotions.
I was surprised by all the detail you went into during the sex scene, but it was great to read after seeing what some other people put out.
I do have a few notes.
Mistake: Before he felt it the belt was a clack sound against the floor. His buttons (was) undone. (should be "were")
When she shifted, slipping her legs out from under her to hang over the edge of the bed and made () moved to stand he stopped her. (Should be an "a" there and change "moved" to "move")
"Oh Kami," he muffled against her mouth (not sure if the "kami" is a japanese expression, or if you wrote the wrong name)
Otherwise great job! I look forward to reading some of your other works.
| Haselnussagen 11/5/11 . chapter 1
Oh my. This was so good. I loved Sakura's confession to him at the end. It was so lovely and beautiful.