I really like your writing, but I feel you might be able to put more details into the chapters. They seem kind of short for what there worth. I think you could go a lot more in depth into things, like the characters personalities and such. Still, it's nice to see someone who enjoys and actually remembers Zeonic Front.

This is a Great story,Any chance after this story is over,you do stories on Other Gundam,s Video Games like MSG:Encounters in Space,MSG:Side story the Blue Desriny,MSG:Lost War Chronicles and MSG:side story 0079 Rise from the Ashes.

yeah such epicness of the zeonic front. you have written this very well Hail Zeon!

ah yeah loved that game. and you write it so well I hope to read more. sucks that I lost mine

That Great.

I hope Zeonic special ops,s will show all the Bad things Zeon did too and Not show what Zeon did was Justified.

They Drop a Colony on Earth and Gassed Colonies at Side1,side2 and side4,How can you justify killing millions?

so far i like this Variation of Zeonic Front Fanfic, its really good and i want more, its a strong, well pasted fanfic.

Good start

Zeon only did so Good at the start,casue they were the only ones with Mobile suit.

Will you follow canon?