I really think you should do a second part where they get together, this made me cry and I would love for it to have a happy ending.

So sad...

I like it, its well written with a good plot. However, personally, I think a second chapter with Rangiku trying to patch things up with Toshiro would be awesome.

i like this, you should try for a sequel.

this demands a sequel!

Quite sad. But good writing!

That's so sad. Great job. Amazing.

this is good! though I kinda feel something missing, like not enough the manga/anime elements, but this is good enough.

as for the plot itself, because I like a happy ending I would really encourage you to add a new chapter to show a good ending or maybe put even more angst to it. I can actually see this thing coming, but never saw a decent story that emphasize on fraternization things on Bleach, glad I found this I think :)

good start i think this will be interesting if it's a chapter

it's a little depressing though

what was your yu-gi-oh story i'd like to read it

probably the most depressing thing ive read and im guessing it wont be fixed or get resolved ne. now this branch of a reality shall remain a dark one ne for both individuals. sad ne, very sad.

but the writing style and composure of the characters was very well captured ne

What is that really the end! I want another chapter please!

omg.. i love this! and hopefully it wouldn't be a one shot..

i think this is the first hitsu/matsu fic that matsumoto was the one who thinks "this is wrong because he is my superior" and whatnot.. its usually hitsugaya being his rational self and always sticks by the rules.. so its great that you came up with that.. keep it up! i wanna read more!

Damn you! This needs to be multi-chaptered! I absolutely loved the read! After I was finished I was left wanting more! Grrrr. I really think you should continue this! It would be so interesting!

Don't take it personally; it's all about the pairing. I know nothing about yu-gi-oh or I'd read it, but I have 2 or 3 stories that have 0 reviews-0! And I actually think they're pretty good, but they're contest fics so the pairings are wacky, and...no one reads them.

I, however, will always read a good HitsuMatsu fic! I'm excited about thus one; I've been needing some good angst lately, as long as there's some hope of a reconciliation. I wasn't expecting this, but I like it. Hitsugaya's speech was both appropriate and believable, as was Matsumotos immediate overreaction and then instant regret. I hope you keep writing this!

I really liked this chapter its nice to see a conflict between matsumoto and hitsugaya for a change. I hope you write more for this stroy I am really looking forward to it :) great work

Sorry about Yu Gi Oh. I stopped watching in middle school several years ago but i'm sure it was good based on your story here even if it was a little depressing. i am a HitsuMatsu fan too. down with Momo.