nice one lucky rice field of the sky

Awesome I showed My Friends This and We Started Laughing.

you should write a second one

I really like the plot of this story. The friendship checker idea was very creative.

I get the third heart! 1 was for friendship, one was for dawn loving ash, and the third was ash loving dawn!

Awesome story but what does the third heart mean?

Great story but what dose the third heart mean?

cool

I'm prett sure I sound stupid, but I don't get it. I'm so like Ash. I'm so stubborn I overlook things. That was funny; Brock's predicament.

Awwww how cute and omg Satoshi(Ash) u r so dense, and u did an amazing job portraying the 2 they were so in character, btw u shud continue this

Awwwwwwwww! And it was getting really good you should extend the story that way its even better

Great one-shot, i really liked it, but i think you mean Pokemon Breeder instead of Pokemon Doctor, because Brock wants to be the worlds best Breeder, or it might have changed in the Diamond and Pearl series, im not sure because i havent watched past like episode 15 or so of it, so if im worng then im wrong

This story was really good, this to me wouldn't be out of Place on the anime. Good Job!