Yes, a conclusion is definitely needed here. The sooner the better. I've read all the chapters in one sitting and I've already been held captive to the story. It is sad and it did bring a tear to my eye. Well, keep up the good work and I hope to see an ending soon.

I like it update

O! I'm on pins and needles!

Beautiful, that's all I have to say.

K. Yoshi

OMG I HATE YOU! YOU MADE ME CRY SO BADLY! my mother came in my room seeing me cry she wouldnt leave me alone for an hour asking wat was wrong with me. But i gotta hand it to ya, noone has been able to make me cry so congrats this is an all time favorite fic of mine from now on. MWAH MUCH LOVE TO THE AUTHOR!

this story's so sad, I still love it but it's so emotional. I might even cry! I can't wait to read more.

I wish you had let Ryoke have more fun as and officer before getting on with the depressing stuff.

It is so very good to see you writing again! I'm extra glad it is with this story too! I'm on the edge of my seat! Go go go go gadget!

Di

woah I love this story! Very detailed and excellently written.

OMG.. It is so awesome chapter 6! I just finish all chapters in one hour.. You give all good details..

Hm... I hope it is Tenchi who strode through the flames.. Or maybe it is Hotsuma? and I hope Ryoko will still alive because I want her go back home where she belongs.

wow! this is an awesome fic hurry up and write the next chapter!

dun dun dun!spice with her new partner,and maybe sasami will find her(i hope) and every one will be happy,or not.okay get that whole space bettween paragraphs,go look at a book.good job its a story that you can get sucked it.(sorta)

later

washu isnt for juria but any who,better that the last great washu,decent voice good in fact,but whats the deal with the big spaces bettween each paragraph? come on now.

lol lupin! nice touch i think your starting to warm up.much beter than the last.

aaw that was sweet with the bar tender.

not bad,better that the first chapter.