| Reviews for D9 Word Drabbles |
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Zuvios Gemini 10/1/12 . chapter 1These are all good. :D I hope to see more. |
Morgane Lurker 8/22/11 . chapter 1Good fic, I like the mix of takes on in-mopvie scenes as well as the "extra" ones like 'Music' and 'Space' - Oliver is just so adorable in these two. These drabbles are short and concise, yet they say alot. My only tip, though, is that instead of "He watched Oliver cry about not being able to go home for a few minutes", you could write "He watched Oliver cry for a few minutes about not being able to go home". The first time I read the sentence it was a bit unclear to me. But it is just a trifle in an otherwise great fic. |
0ld-girl 8/18/11 . chapter 1I love your drabbles - simple, short, yet tells us all:) I am enjoying the drabbles so far, so keep up the excellent work:) ps - I like the music one the best (so cute how oliver is trying to dance!) and the one of wikus being alone brought a sting of tears into my eyes - it totally moved me;) |