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Reviews For: Death is coming

Z451
2008-08-22
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, could even be horror.
Mercury
2003-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhen i read the reviews I was ready to be impressed or deeply astonished, but neither of that happened. It was very much a disappointment to me, maybe caused by my high expectations, the guardian angel is a dumb idea, as well as the switches in time and feelings of your main character. And having death as a real person is certainly not original and has been done in much better ways, try to describe more and get more depth in your characters and their emotions.
Zuknftige Pfanne
2003-05-04
ch 1,
abuseVery deep...I love it! ^_^
Christina G.
2002-11-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh wow. i guess that was what he had to complete.
HaywireHakaze
2002-08-04
ch 1,
abuseO.O *blink blink* O.O
Rissa of the Saiya-Jin
2002-04-16
ch 1,
abuseWow... I don't know how to say this... Maybe the only way is - *bows* That was the best fic I have ever read. Dammit, fic's such a stupid word. That was more than a fic... more than fanfiction.... Humans don't have a word for stuff like this yet.
Super Eevee
2002-04-16
ch 1,
abuseVERY profound! I couldnt stop reading! even though a hundred things were going on, I stopped and thought about this fantastic fanfiction. Please continue to write fanfictions, as I look forward to reading the rest of your stories with great enthusiasum ^_^
KS Claw
2002-04-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseOOoh man...powa Vegeta! Great story! *sniffle* BTW! New chapter up of "be nice Vegeta"!!
WeyrdSister
2002-04-14
ch 1,
abuseI had shivers run down my spine while reading this - good work!
Jeril Dragonsoul
2002-04-14
ch 1,
abuseWhooooooooooa!!!! I like it!! I love anything with Death and anything with Vegeta!! *shivers* Now I'm going to have nightmares because I have this image of a thing at the foot of my bed smiling at me eerily. *looks around, is now paranoid* Really good!! Keep writing!!
BarbaraSheridan
2002-04-13
ch 1,
abuseWell done. Sad, but well done.
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