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| Z451 2008-08-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, could even be horror. |
| Mercury 2003-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhen i read the reviews I was ready to be impressed or deeply astonished, but neither of that happened. It was very much a disappointment to me, maybe caused by my high expectations, the guardian angel is a dumb idea, as well as the switches in time and feelings of your main character. And having death as a real person is certainly not original and has been done in much better ways, try to describe more and get more depth in your characters and their emotions. |
| Zuknftige Pfanne 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseVery deep...I love it! ^_^ |
| Christina G. 2002-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh wow. i guess that was what he had to complete. |
| HaywireHakaze 2002-08-04 ch 1, | abuseO.O *blink blink* O.O |
| Rissa of the Saiya-Jin 2002-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow... I don't know how to say this... Maybe the only way is - *bows* That was the best fic I have ever read. Dammit, fic's such a stupid word. That was more than a fic... more than fanfiction.... Humans don't have a word for stuff like this yet. |
| Super Eevee 2002-04-16 ch 1, | abuseVERY profound! I couldnt stop reading! even though a hundred things were going on, I stopped and thought about this fantastic fanfiction. Please continue to write fanfictions, as I look forward to reading the rest of your stories with great enthusiasum ^_^ |
| KS Claw 2002-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOOoh man...powa Vegeta! Great story! *sniffle* BTW! New chapter up of "be nice Vegeta"!! |
| WeyrdSister 2002-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI had shivers run down my spine while reading this - good work! |
| Jeril Dragonsoul 2002-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWhooooooooooa!!!! I like it!! I love anything with Death and anything with Vegeta!! *shivers* Now I'm going to have nightmares because I have this image of a thing at the foot of my bed smiling at me eerily. *looks around, is now paranoid* Really good!! Keep writing!! |
| BarbaraSheridan 2002-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWell done. Sad, but well done. |