| Reviews for Life after Death |
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lostgamer64 5/9/13 . chapter 1There's only one way to end this, push him back in. He won't know what hit 'm |
a fan of both 4/2/13 . chapter 5 Wolfsbane is scottish not irish |
Arrankor 3/9/13 . chapter 5Enjoyed the story I hope to see updates. |
xPhantomHunterx 2/23/13 . chapter 5OKAY YOU GOT ME HOOKED VERY NICE BY THE WAY IT THE NEW SUIT BASED OF THE UNLIMITED ONE I ALWAYS LIKE IT THE BEST |
Eric 2/19/13 . chapter 5 Must have more |
Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 1 Oh noes zombie apocalypse! D: |
Jedi101 1/29/13 . chapter 5Great stuff I can't wait for the next chapter I love how your right after Peters death in Ultimate comics and the the end of X-men Evolution. P.S. I hope Peter would not want to keep the extra legs and the stingers in his fist when he is Finish with Hela.(Personally I don't like how he looks in my head but that's just me it's your story) |
Ryuus2 1/27/13 . chapter 5Dormamu really is pulling out all the stops to keep Hela out of his way. To bad for him Death Dieties tend to have their own hand-picked ass-kickers on standby. I wonder how Valkyrie and Wolfsbane handle the revelation that Peter isn't just a capable copy of himself? Speaking of Rahne, could you maybe lessen her accent a bit? It's so thick at parts that I can't even tell what she's saying. And then their are parts in perfect English and it just throws me off. Keep up the great work! |
honorablemerc 1/26/13 . chapter 5i like the story and am happy to see you are continuing it and cant wait for the next chapter |
NeoTyson 1/26/13 . chapter 5Honestly I dont know much of wolfbane but she does seem like interesting character yo the story |
Guest 1/23/13 . chapter 4 HEY WILL PETER MEET THE kid that took over while he was dead |
mkeeg91 1/24/13 . chapter 4looks great! talk about creepy powers, but super cool! |
Ryuus2 1/24/13 . chapter 4You know, I'm surprised Marvel didn't do this themselves. They already confirmed that he made it to Valhalla, so we're not gonna get to see him until something happens over there...unless there's another clone or two is in storage somewhere, which there usually is. That's an interesting set of upgrades. So you've basically given him the 616 Peter's upgrade after The Others storyline, but included the legs of one of the Spider-women. Hm, considering the nature of his new mutations, running into Logan could be for the best. Few people know how to handle deadly bone growths like him. Rahne with Peter sounds like it could be an interesting pair. I look forward to seeing how yo manage it. There is going to be a large number of people who are going to punch/kick/blast first when they see the new and improved Ultimate Spider-Man. I hope Thor gets around to it soon so they can validate his story and get down to the difficult part, telling May he's back. Keep up the great work! |
NeoTyson 1/22/13 . chapter 4Liking the new powers and chp, keep going plz |
Dragonskyt 1/22/13 . chapter 4Oh I like this story very much, but you might check on your spelling once in a while as I spot a lot of small mistakes like writing kill instead of killed. Most of the times you just miss a couple of letters, so it isn't that hard to guess what is said, but for readers it is better for the eyes to read without backtracking. |