I thought this was really adorable! Nice work! i especially liked the ending, where Ash wondered if they had the caught same poke ball they had dropped. :)

Is there more?

Love it! :) Hope to read new chapters soon.

I wanna cuddle with GARY! Oh wait you said the story :( Great story! Gotta love Palletshippies!

That was cute, altough kinda short, too. Interesting idea, that pokéball And of course it's the same one, Gary, we all know it! :D

Hope to see more soon

Just read this chapter Lol more people need to review this. It's gonna be weird if it's only like me and one other person :P

I enjoyed this chapter. It was short but I think it got the point across nicely. And I thought that the young-Ash and young-Gary interaction was cute :3

One sort of criticism-y comment, though... This sentence: "Ash laughed before complying with his boyfriend's wishes and leaning his head on the slightly taller boy's shoulder and Pikachu sat in Ash's lap while Gary had the album in his own." I thought it was kind of awkwardly worded. There are 4 prepositions and no punctuation marks, and I think it's kinda run-on-ish. Also I think it's a little weird that you use Ash's name twice in the one sentence. I might break it up into 2 sentences or try and reword it to something like "Ash laughed before placing his head on the slightly-taller-boy's shoulders, complying with his boyfriend's wishes. With Pikachu in his lap and the album in Gary's, ..." or something like that. But hey, that's just my opinion xP

Interesting, I really want to know what kind of pictures there are inside I'm also kinda interested to know how old boys are in this story? It wasn't mention anywhere, was it? Anyway, hopefully there's going to be more soon!

"No more kissing until we look through the book. Then we can kiss all you want. Deal?"

Ohohohoo

Whooo! I'm happy I finally got to read this! :D

I loved this first chapter! I thought you did really well with the interaction between Ash and Gary. It was really the perfect mix of their playful banter and the cuteness one would expect between them as a couple.

I thought it was great! I can't wait to read what PBN has in store for chapter 2 :)