This story is set after Graduation, as in 2007/8. I'm not insulting Obama, I'm insulting Bush Jr.

...And the next time you choose to voice your assumptions, it's spelt 'dues'.

why the **** did you bring up your politcal views by insulting obama

i think he has done a great job as president but then again i get the feeling your from a rich family and you hate that your finaly having to pay your dews to the country instead of screwing over the poor

Excellent story so far. I look forward to Kim's next encounter with Shego and seeing how Ron and Kim handle things.

This is a really great story. Your writing style is really great and you've managed to turn everything about the Kim Possible cartoon into something that I can take seriously as a reader, even the monkey kung-fu and the fictitious villains. Instead of this being just a corny piece of fanfiction, you've taken the outline and structure of the cartoon and made it into something worth reading. I sincerely hope you update soon.

I just love this story. All of your stories that I have read have been great. I really can't wait to what happens next. And that whole windpipe thing damn. As soon as I read that I was like good god lol. But great work and thanks for sharing.

Okay, you're a brit. You can tell by some of these phrases, "Pyjamas" "quite a thump" "covering an eye". You're also a male, distinguishable by the number of pronouns you use. Women tend to use more. Obviously a star wars fan, or else you would have actually explained the trash scene. You are about mid-to-late twenties, and definitally have a preference towards beer over anything stronger. Of course i only say all of this to show off and see if i'm right, but then again, i only need to explain myself if i'm wrong.
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And as for the actual work, I must say i am really impressed. You put together what sounds like a viable scenario, the characters are spot-on so far, and the "Motivator" is a villain (?) that i can see become a very interesting factor. Good work here, and give my regards to Chloe.
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P.S. How'd I Do?

Narewelshwold is completely right. this fic is sorta 'meh'. I wouldn't suggest it to anyone. but kudos for knowing the difference between your and you're :D

nice. Very very nice.

I've been following Between Bouts and really enjoyed this story while waiting for updates. Now I'm following both stories! Keep up the good work :)

Sadly, I found this fic pretty disappointing.

I've stopped reading here because I'm just too annoyed with how you plonked a completely canon Kim Possible in some grimdark batman-esque world complete with Jigsaw/Scarecrow crossbreed.

I get that this is drama/angst, but why can't Kim have developed some of the layers of personality you've given Shego? Bah. What is it about Kigo fics that make people want to develop all sorts of background facts about Shego but leave Kim unchanged? Baffling.

At least there were no grammar or spelling mistakes, and the fic was put together well even if I don't care for what it was presenting me with.

Seems bizarre saying that I don't like this as much as your other story when this one is supposed to be more... "Main" I guess?

Between Bouts is a really interesting experiment in formatting I guess, and it has a great deal less angst. It's more humorous I suppose. It still has angst, but it's not rubbing it in your face like it is here, where it's one of the primary genres. I guess it's just not my thing.

Either way, BB is the longer story already anyway. I like this one, but I don't think I'll be subscribing too it, just not my cup of tea.

I 'do' find it weird how few reviews this one has compared to the other though. I wonder if a lot of people just review every other chapter on Between Bouts, or if it's something to do with chapter length or the fact that increased length puts it over the 40,000 word threshold? It just seems weird. I'd imagine plenty of people have to have at least tried reading this story once, and it seems a shame if they didn't bother to comment on whether they liked it or not.

Anyway, all the best to you. I'll be looking forward to more of your other story and anything new you write in the future.

Amazing so far, keep going i cant wait to read more!

Waahhh, I want to read further.. O_O Damn it.. I have to wait.. Pleasee, go further! 33

Shego's a murdurer P: murderer

OMG! definitely a few shockers here...

almost gagged about ron and kim's sex time...ugh...wasn't expecting that. the LBD and the cowgirl positions...yea a bit too much for me ;P hehe but if it was kigo...well...haa haa

and of course Dr. Ms. P! go girl! i'm glad she didn't speak about the threesome, i think kim would have had a heart attack...;P

well at least dr. P figured out the kigo part fast...she can give kim some helpful advice :P