 LizzieLyn 4/6/11 . chapter 1that was interesting. I don't necessarily want you to continue it, but a story about how/why Harry had gone mad might be nice. just a thought. |
 Lord Pickett Fence 6/6/04 . chapter 1how the hell did that happen? you must continue! i can't stop reading at a cliffhanger ending like this! it's too good to stop reading! |
 Sorbet 10/27/03 . chapter 1 Well, since you wrote this fic over a year ago, I guess you aren't going to continue it. No offence, but I think that's good. I mean, you killed EVERYONE. Accept for Ron (duh) and Hagrid the Chicken. Harry is nuts, and Voldemort is dead. We all know that in the end, either Harry, or Lord Ugly has to die, so what more is there to write about?... My point precisely |
 Rutu 3/24/03 . chapter 1 Wow, u write as well as your sister. She told me to read your stories, so I started with this one. It's really nice. You should continue it soon. I LOVE it. There's one thing that I don't get. Is Ron going to try to WALK to America? Well, please update soon. |
 Lily of the Valley stupid computer won't let me login throws computer out window 8/2/02 . chapter 1 I like this, but I rather resent the fact that Harry's cracked and Ron saved the day... And that everyone is dead... WAIT! WHERE ARE SIRIUS AND REMUS? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *bursts into tears* NO! They got away, didn't they! No, they're too noble to run away! They died in the batle, didn't they? *sobs uncontrollalby and runs away to hide in her closet so she can read happy stuff where they're alive*
I liked this idea. Wait, I just said I didn't like the entire idea of it. I mean, in the final battle, wouldn't more people than Ron have survived? And why Ron? and why did Hagrid chicken out and run away with Madame Large (Maxime is French for "large".)? *whimpers* I'm scared... must read some humor fics... preferably Padfoot...
*Lily of the Valley*
P.S- I'm an author. |
 Saeko-chan 7/26/02 . chapter 1 Depressing fic, but altogether good. I haven't seen anybody write a fic like this before, or maybe it's just me. _ I'm an author, and my penname is Saeko-chan, besides if you just type Saeko I'm the only one with the nick. _ |
 Ravenscroft 6/8/02 . chapter 1Wow, that's really good. It's a take on things I never would have thought of. And don't worry about the depressing-ness, and certainly don't apologise for it! It's what makes this story original and if people don't like that then they're stupid. I really really hope you continue with thise, because I would definitely stay reading it! |
 VirtualFaerie 5/10/02 . chapter 1GO RON! But I can't believe you killed Hermione...what's with killing off main characters? Are you okay? ::checks temperature:: |
 A Silent Grain 4/17/02 . chapter 1Wow. A creepy twist on Harry Potter. I read the books. Enjoyed them. I was in seventh grade when I read the first one. Now I'm in Ninth. A few to many 'for's in the second paragraph. Other than that, wonderful. |
 Chablis Jameson 4/17/02 . chapter 1You told me to review this story under your account so I am. I still love, and like I said, I'd put you as a favorite author, except I don't know how. Does anyone? Anyway, great job, I absoultly love it, you really have a talent. Don't stop writing! |
 ice blue1 4/15/02 . chapter 1Hey... I reviewed this on silvermoon's account... and I'm reviewing again... wait, what did I say? I forgot... anyway, this is a good story, but POOR RON! It would do well as a standalone but it does leave to many questions unanswered, so I'd have to say... continue! _ |
 Wilwarindiel 4/14/02 . chapter 1I think I reviewed this story on Silvermoon's account. I'm going to say the same thing here. You could leave this as a single fic, and let it be sad in itself, or you could continue it on with Ron's struggle to get over the pain and his life in America. Either way, it's a very good story. |
 Vivian Kain 4/14/02 . chapter 1YAY! You said to direct reviews here, so I am! You know I love it since I already reviewed it, and I want you to continue it asap! |
 Indarae 4/14/02 . chapter 1Eek, that IS depressing. The last sentence does have promise, though - if you do continue, it would be fairly easy to end up with some sort of crossover. I'm not the hugest Ron fan, but his being the one to kill the Dark Lord does seem to fit in this case. Perhaps a bit more in this chapter, if you rewrite, to include more of the battle and -why- Harry was incapacitated? Cheers!
S. Miriam Hornbach |
 Mauve Lipgloss 4/14/02 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story! I was very sad yet very touching! |