MOOOOORE :D

Very nice so far! (By the way...the story of kitchenware that you didn't actually write out...was that a VERY subtle reference to the ladle? XD I never played any of the other games by the first one.)

Awesome, awesome, awesome! Your writing skills are superb! You have no idea how badly I want this to be a game! I love Alice and Ryuk,do you mind if I do fanart on them? My fingers are itching to draw them!

Great chapter! I like how Ryuk deals with things, real calm and collected. i Also think you managed to portray Alice as a very cute and likeable character. Though not much is known about Tyson...still I liked it and am looking forward to the next update. Those are all what I liked about the story. What I loved was the way Alice and Ryuk interacted with each other. It I was a girl, I'd be like "aww cuuuute!" but I think you get it. Also looking forward to a possible thickening of the plot? Anyway, great work. I think your writing is very good apart from a few grammar errors (though they're very unnoticeable. One would have to read twice to find them. Keep it up!

Hmm, lovely...you updated! I have to say, I love Ryuk as a character! I also like his relationship with both Jin and Anya; you portrayed them quite well to say the least. I also like Alice's character and look forward to finding out more about her as the story proceeds. All in all, I absolutely love this story and this is proof to me of what I had said in my review of chapter one that this story has quite a lot of potential. Please keep writing. I will keep on reviewing. On another note, sorry for the late review...

Lol! The hammer! The most trustiest tool of all for a craftnight! Luv it!

Wow, an unique story. You are still planning on posting, right? it is a great story and i think its potential is greater than most in the SN archive. Only thing is, you should consider writing different characters' speeches on seperate paragraphs. I will be following this story. Keep writing please, it would be a sin to drop such a potent story. I can only imagine a bright future when concerning this story :-