I liked how you wrote Hanna yelling at her dad and thanks for writing a cool idea.

loved it! very nice adding on to fashion show. i was super disappointed lack of haleb in the episode. :( but good job , can see it playing out like that.

awww, thats so sad. :( but i love caleb and hanna. they are perfect! great chapter! update soon!

Very sweet and powerful!

Awwww! I loved the Hanna and Caleb part, but at the end, I felt really bad for Hanna and her dad. I hope you update soon!

Great story! Can't wait to see where you take it!

really cute write more :) or update another chapter :)