 Warpt Chaos 4/18/02 . chapter 5I read the story and am reviewing, just like you asked :) The story is good. The main suggestion I have is that you slow it down. GO into more detail. Like the battle: you could have gone into more detail, about how buildings were burned (like I'm sure they were), and how the necros fought back. They have more than curses and summoning skills. What about bone spears the armor of the Paladins and such. But the idea is very good, about the forces fighting. I was thinking of making a type like this, but didn't know who should fight. You could say that you took the idea right outta my mind :) Keep up the good work, and the next chapter to my story will be up shortly |
 Glenn393 4/16/02 . chapter 4Bravo! Very well done! I cannot wait till the next chapter. Please continue, I await anxiously for whatever happens next, i have so many unanswered questions. Once again, Bravo!
-]Glenn393[- |