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Reviews for: The Guardian of Light and Darkness
JoshJones 8/22/04 . chapter 8
The Dark lord in Lord of the Rings name is Sauron
Zyne 8/5/03 . chapter 8
I think this is a great fic.i like the the battle scenes the best.GO NIKATA!
jay 6/16/02 . chapter 8
good story. it could use alot more detail and in my opinion you made the necros too weak
Nguyen ngoc quynh 5/25/02 . chapter 1
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someguy 5/7/02 . chapter 1
Nice. That had much more detail. I like it. Please continue.
Warpt Chaos 4/18/02 . chapter 5
I read the story and am reviewing, just like you asked :) The story is good. The main suggestion I have is that you slow it down. GO into more detail. Like the battle: you could have gone into more detail, about how buildings were burned (like I'm sure they were), and how the necros fought back. They have more than curses and summoning skills. What about bone spears the armor of the Paladins and such. But the idea is very good, about the forces fighting. I was thinking of making a type like this, but didn't know who should fight. You could say that you took the idea right outta my mind :) Keep up the good work, and the next chapter to my story will be up shortly
Glenn393 4/16/02 . chapter 4
Bravo! Very well done! I cannot wait till the next chapter. Please continue, I await anxiously for whatever happens next, i have so many unanswered questions. Once again, Bravo!

-]Glenn393[-
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