 T-I-V-A1432 7/22/11 . chapter 1WOW. Just wow. That was awesome! There are not enough Jo/Zane fics. PLEASE PLEASE write another. |
 Sara60691 7/22/11 . chapter 1wow. i love this story! it's so sweet and Zane, lol, that's exactly what Zane would do too. Very good for a first story. |
 AlternateShadesofBlue 7/21/11 . chapter 1That was great! Very believable and sweet. I could picture it really well. |
 Wyndes 7/21/11 . chapter 1Oh, this was really nice. I really like that he didn't claim to love her already, and that he was going to be a gentleman at his place. He's a very appealing Zane and this was a great story, thanks for sharing! |
 heratulipsia 7/21/11 . chapter 1cute and very believable! I just love them! Good work! |
 Klutzygirl33 7/21/11 . chapter 1Aww, cute! I loved this. |
 AllyrienDM 7/21/11 . chapter 1Great job, especially for your first story! Quite well written. I particularly liked the part in the middle - "Oh, hey there". Totally cute. Nice touch with Zane returning the ring. |