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| Reviews for Vampire NonFiction |
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   da-birdiegirl725 11/14/11 . chapter 1This is really good. If you were a bit more detailed and less hazy in a few parts, it'd be pretty darn close to perfect :) |
| elena 8/30/11 . chapter 1 Great concept but you need to proof read. The plot is wonderful but some of the small typos and grammatical errors take away from it. A good trick is to always wait 24 hours after writing something to proof read it. It makes you realize so many mistakes that otherwise would have been overlooked. Good job though! |
| Guest 8/19/11 . chapter 1 perfect |
| Kluvly 8/17/11 . chapter 1 hahaha great story |
| ANAHI'Simagnation 7/31/11 . chapter 1 Haha I loved this! It was funny & cute Yeah it Is a little Awkard writing a rated M story for the first time isn't it but I had fun when I wrote mine even though it's not perfect Your story was still pretty good |
| Degrassian-Love 7/30/11 . chapter 1 I loved this so much |
| AshleyMocha12 7/22/11 . chapter 1 Good :) |
| writersblock92 7/21/11 . chapter 1 Perect! :) |
| Alyx Monticino 7/21/11 . chapter 1 I actually found this quite intresting. I like how you put Clare's fanfiction, like the actual story in you story, so readers would know what happened in it. |
| Deena 7/21/11 . chapter 1 I loved it! Very creative! But were they dating in this yet? |
| undertheupperhand 7/21/11 . chapter 1 Loved it! :) |
