It was okay, you had it together pretty well... kinda nice to see Chidori/Yuuhi fanfics.

Oh, and I noticed that in your story you had Chidori's age wrong. Just thought I'd let you know Chidori was actually 17 years old. The tennyo DNA stunted her growth, so that's why she looked like a 10-year-old. So she and Yuuhi really could have been together.

aw...how sad...i always thought yuuhi and chidori make a good couple...WRITE MORE! maybe a AU Yuuhi/Chidori fic?

hiya! i've read and reread your story a lot of times already... i just tend to forget to leave a review... you're novelisation is really great! i don't see why other people keep on forgetting that chidori is included in the story! hehe... the title was ver expressive too! *too late for words* a story about regret and hidden love )

keep on writing! i would love to read more of your fics! please read and review mine too! keep up the good work! email!

i can't figure out why people would like yuuhi/aya! i just can't! well that is my opinion...i still think that yuuhi and chidori make a GREAT couple! too bad she died.from the whole serious that is the only part i saw after that i disaided not to watch it all.aya has touya...like yuuhi is still single! and chidori did love him and stuff. not like aya. sorry people! all those yuuhi/aya fans! that is just my opinion! please do not take it seriously! it is a free world...i think? _

errr...nice story!

i like it! and i als think that yuuhi and chidori make a good pairing and i like that pairing!

Arrgg... I'm crying again. Oh well, I love the story... it was sad and I like it. Besides I love the YuuhiChidori pairing.

I don't want to give any spoilers out, but I suggest y'all read Episode of Miku (sequel of AnC).

OMG! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! *starts crying and wont stop* this was totally beautiful! i loved it! so bittersweet...

OMG! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! *starts crying and wont stop* this was totally beautiful! i loved it! so bittersweet...

YOU KNOW I REALLY AS IN TOTALLY LOVED YOUR STORY IT EVEN MADE ME CRY(_)!NO JOKE!COZ I'M REALLY AN EMOTIONAL PERSON(HEHEHE)WELL ANYWAYS I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY IS THE COOLEST OF THEM ALL IN AYASHI NO CERES,AND I THINK THAT YUUHI/CHIDORI FICS ARE REALLY THE "BEST"!I HOPE YOULL HAVE TIME TO E-MAIL ME IF YOULL MAKE ANOTHER STORY THAT IS Y/C,OK!WELL IM DONE...(';')

YOU KNOW I REALLY AS IN TOTALLY LOVED YOUR STORY IT EVEN MADE ME CRY(_)!NO JOKE!COZ I'M REALLY AN EMOTIONAL PERSON(HEHEHE)WELL ANYWAYS I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY IS THE COOLEST OF THEM ALL IN AYASHI NO CERES,AND I THINK THAT YUUHI/CHIDORI FICS ARE REALLY THE "BEST"!I HOPE YOULL HAVE TIME TO E-MAIL ME IF YOULL MAKE ANOTHER STORY THAT IS Y/C,OK!WELL IM DONE...(';')

YOU KNOW I REALLY AS IN TOTALLY LOVED YOUR STORY IT EVEN MADE ME CRY(_)!NO JOKE!COZ I'M REALLY AN EMOTIONAL PERSON(HEHEHE)WELL ANYWAYS I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY IS THE COOLEST OF THEM ALL IN AYASHI NO CERES,AND I THINK THAT YUUHI/CHIDORI FICS ARE REALLY THE "BEST"!I HOPE YOULL HAVE TIME TO E-MAIL ME IF YOULL MAKE ANOTHER STORY THAT IS Y/C,OK!WELL IM DONE...(';')

OMG! It's sooooo sad! I just spoiled it for myself because I haven't really seen this part yet. *cries* OMG! Poor Chidori! Poor Yuuhi! *cries even louder* This is soooo great! I love it!

This is really good... The emotions are so visible.. it reaches out toward the readers.

*cries* That seen was sooo sad..u.u It seemed as if..it..were...taking place all over again...*cries more* It was really, really good, and I thought it happened..just that way in the anime, though I have forgotten. Thanks for reminding me of her death...She SHOULD have some appreciation, like in this fic, and I thank you for that. Continue on writing, goodbye.

Ceres

P.S. I really like the idea of Yuuhi/Aya pairing, but...I know Yuuhi loved Chidori, as Aya did with Tooya, and it would never work out... though they still might have had feelings for each other.

This is so sweet, and Chidori/Yuuhi fics aren't all that popular...but I think by the end Yuuhi truly values Chidori though. Great fic! -Sharyn