It was way too short!

Tough, I really liked it! :)

Nicely done! ;)

Well written, and the symmetry to Operation and Madeline well observed. But it is somewhat TOO alike, Michael and Nikita acting like clones of their predecessors. I think your point could have still been made if you'd added something unique to their relationship, left some of their original characters in, made them alike Ops and Madeline in situation but give their partnership a different dynamisn.

it seems like a possible future.

loved it

dark sinister chilling

everything that makes it great

I liked it. It's bare and short, but gets the point across. The scary thing is, it *could* happen. Nicely done, but somewhat flat. The shock value was there, but the *umph* wasn't.

good idea

I liked this, only there should have been more. It really has a great plot and shpuld be pushed forword. I would like to hear how this change happened, why they are still on edge, ect.

-monique

Wow. Definitely wow.

Very good! It's bare, I wish there was more, but very plausible. The thought of Michael and Nikita turning into another Ops/Madeline has crossed my mind a number of times. Nice to see I'm not the only one! It'd be great to see more!

Very well done for a short piece. While the concept certainly could be stretched into a longer story, I personally hope for a far different future for those two. So the little chill works nicely. :)

Although I would've loved to hear more (what had happended before etc.) it was really good just as it was. Giving us a hint of "what might be" Good work :)

Nikita took over Maddy's job. I would pay money to read a good fic were Nikita gets to waste Operations and Madeline. This is a good fic. Perfect characterization given the circumstance. Serves Micheal right to want what he can not have after toying with her for so long. perfect ten toes

Neato!