Interesting perspective on Elder and a very moving fic-well done.

..You just managed to take Eldest, and make him into a relatable and maybe even understandable character. And in only one chapter. ...You WIN!

have you read Huger Games, well if you havent you should.

the way that you portray Eldest make shim sound like hatmich

Daym, girl. Your writing skills are about a million times better than what I usually see on this site. And you clearly have a talent for writing and a natural feel for characters. Way to humanize the villain in a way that didn't make me want to gag. I didn't think that was possible. Really, truly lovely.

Wow. You took the the character I dislike most from the book and made him human and relatable. In a really cool format, too.