Hey! So I just read this all and it was really good, nice job! I especially liked Katara's character since that's how she treated Zuko on the show at first. I was wondering if you could give me the line from Serenity, if you don't mind. It's been bugging me that I can't fin it! Anyway, great job!

Really well written. I loved how you came up with the chi passages. You should be a professional writer. Other than the few curse words, its a really good story. I loved the way you wrote it.

For your very first fanfic, this is really well done. Some minor spelling/grammar errors, nothing that can't be fixed by a thorough betareader. I like your chara design and the insight into Zuko's inner torture ...

Such a wonderful story! Please- I MUST read more!

Shouldn't Sokka have let him heal first before asking him that?

Happy New Years!

Huh? I'm a tad confused... is it finished? D: If so, NOOOO! It was good, I liked it, but I want to read mooooore... But, yeah, okay I guess it is a pretty good a time to end it as any.

Anyways, yeah, thanks for writing this! :D I really enjoyed it!

Merry Christmas!

loved it! you did a fabulous job!

It's sad the story came to an end, but anyway thanks for sharing.

I really liked this .. it fit in well with their universe. It's nice to see a calm Toph still being a bad-ass XD

Mmmmm, excellent chapter!

Merry Christmas! Thanks for the chapter! Toph is cool :D

Awesome. I love how you explained the mind thing, it seemed very real. Well done.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Please update soon!

this is a nice wrap-up to a good story. I'm guessing that the anime you took the past Avatars names from was "Bleach".

Oh, spirits. I'm glad Katara's recovering from her stupidity. I like how your writing this, I've been wonder for a while why people don't accedentily hurt each other more, with the kind of power they have.

-Dyslexic Nerd