Heh.. i have the New Dominion Tank Police series and its very hard to see leona and the puna twins together or even getting along... heh.. just one of those things you can do with fanfiction.. good job.

lol its hilarous keep writing more

nice story

I really loved this story, but it was way too short! I hope you decide to do more on this 'cause it's the best dominion fics I've ever read.

Great work!

darkwoofe

A very sweet fic it's a pity how little dominion tank police fics there are.

A dominion ficcy! Yay! There is far too few of these about and even though it's not exactly my bag (Dedicated Al/Leona shipper here people!) I do my duty as the uber dominion fangirlie and review! An interesting concept...Leona and both the twins. You are a good writer, and i hope that one day you will write more dominion stories :puppy dog-alright fox cub eyes: and maybe a leona/al? Pretty please? I've got shugah, shugah!

FBC-Still working out the mechanics to Dominion: Fire Xcess