Hi, I'm replying to you here from the LJ site. Maybe after Blair goes shopping she and Jo could get into a fight over some expensive thing Blair wants to do for the wedding and then in the end they make up realizing their differences are what makes the relationship work etc. But you might be going in a totally different direction. Sometimes it's best to let the story sit in the back of your mind for a while and then do some freewriting. Sometimes ideas will just come naturally to you that way.
Anyway, this is supposed to be a review..I think you've done a good job making Cindy and Sue Ann into likeable, viable characters. Not much was done with them on the series, and, to me, Sue Ann was kind of overly perky and annoying. I wasn't sure about "CinAnn", but you make it work. I'd also like to see Blair and Jo interact more, but I'm sure you're getting to that. I like how you've made them true to how they are on the show. Some writers make them a little too sweet, and I enjoy reading those stories too, but I like reading a story where it seems like you are actually watching the show.

I really don't like CINDY that much i have to say: she's always making BLAIR like the bad guy SUE ANN also makes fun of her behind her back!
Other than that you know i love how you couple so well JO&BLAIR so can't wait to read more!
PS: loved how MRS. G is so supportive towards her girls lol!

Wao! this is the best chapter so far: JO & BLAIR' s first kiss and i like how you always make MOLLY the detective one on your FOL stories (like on Body Language) the end with NATALIE sneaking behind her friends back is fantastic!
Well done on making your characters so passionate!
PS: i'v got my chapter 2 at the top now and this time i don't have as many bolds lol!

Love the part where you pair JO & BLAIR dancing together on the dance floor with CINDY & SUE ANN lol!

I'm loving it so far and i knew the second couple would be CINDY & SUE ANN lol!

I see you took on the "Ironwoman" version of your challenge. Of course, only you know if you fulfilled the challenge, since it was yours to start. I am looking forward to further chapters from you and Slave2Free.