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| Ella 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewasn't to sappy |
| Lycoris Calantha 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseIt's really nice! May I ask if you know where to download Digimon songs of the internet? I mean the character themes...? |
| Jordy rox ur sox 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abusethe story is sreally cute... sappy, true, but sweet and cute. lol! |
| puasluoma 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! Its such a sweet story!! |
| Pickledevil 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG that's so cute! LOL |
| iJutsu 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLove it |
| My-bf-is-a-beyblade-queen 2004-03-18 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet and...KAWAII! |
| ??????? 2003-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so deliciously sappy, I love it! I need to read more of your fics (even though I know that most of them aren't as sappy). |
| Yoshida Megumi 2003-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good!! It was so cute and I just went awww at the end. I loved it!! |
| Derka Dirk 2002-07-28 ch 1, | abuse*snicker snicker* That was cool *snicker* it really was... sorry about snickering... it was just... kinda funny too! ^_^ Oh well! It'd be funny if there was a sequel and it was in Daisuke's POV and he was all sad... ^_^ That would be PURE TORTURE!!! BWWWAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! ... anyway... did I mention this was good/funny? |
| Sir Brass of the Pen 2001-11-24 ch 1, | abuseNow why, after writing something so sweet and meaningful as this, not write more of it? Neither of them is stronger than the other, both compliment each other perfectly, sounds like a great formula to me. :-D Keep it up RB. :) Cheers, ~Brass |
| LunaReina 2001-10-07 ch 1, | abuseOne word, Beautiful. |
| Ismini 2001-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThe first Takari fanfic I liked!You are really talented to make me like a Takari fic.I support it,but I find them so BOOOORRRRIIIINNNNGGG that I don't usually read Takaris.Those I've read at least suck.Very in-character,especially Kari,very sweet and very cute.Absolutely no fluff inside.The last lines really make the story...^_^ |
| takari-critic2001 2001-08-30 ch 1, | abuseNice story. Although the fight was a tad out of character. Keep it real. Here's the critic, signing off. |
| Squishy Smeck 2001-07-16 ch 1, | abusethats really nice write more! |