"Goddamn, I've never seen so much pink in my life," Logan mumbled.

I've had the exact same thought! The last line was great, just great. That special time in a young girl's life makes for great fanfics, I've noticed, but this one stands on its own. Besides the obvious fun of the situation I liked the parts with Scott and the image of his duck-taped eyes. Made me go "Aw... poor future Cyclops." And I'm a "rugged, sensitive" guy, too

You are so good with these stories lol

Love this. :)

Very good read.

LOL. This is by far the funniest fanfic I've yet to read! awesome! thank you!

hey, great storie! funny and cute. ;)

maia

Hey I love your x-men:evo stories but some of them are missing! Your version of Scott and Jean's first day's with Xaiver and a story where Jean almost drowns bot Logan savers her were here and now they are gone! Is there any way to get them back? If you don't want to repost them could I get you to e-mail them to me as a Word document?

haha! what a great ending! i loved it! thanks! :)

That was hilarious! And the ending was so funny!

haha very good

that was good. I loved the last line.

Another favorite! So funny! I love it..

lol lol lol im still laffin lol

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The last line made me laugh. I congradulate you on completeing a plausable, funny humor fic (not any easy task).

Hi, I love the story, it's just you should have named it something else. The title is catchy and it does go good with the story, it's just that the birds and the bees have to do with sex, not a period. I mean, I see a little sex option thingie in there with Logan and stuff, but not enough to be with Jean. I don't know...I have a feeling that you did it so Logan had to have a little lesson witht he last part with the box of condoms?