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AquaRias 5/10/12 . chapter 8
Continue? Please?
obsessivesyndrome 5/7/12 . chapter 8
Well. I liked it alot mainly because it is so realistic. Tom needs someone he can trust but Harry can't provide that because of his past with Voldie and I understand how difficult it is for him. Still it is extremely painful (I mean frustrating) to read, seeing my favorite characters screw things up because they can't let go of their irrational behavior. I think your characterisation is spot-on and that's really hard to do seeing how mufti-faceted and contradictory both Harry and Tom are.
skarp 4/26/12 . chapter 8
I have always been a fanfic "lurker", I never send reviews or favorite things (other than in-browser bookmarks), but with this fic, I had the /need/ to tell how much I like it. I rarely like any fanfics that are not short and straight-to-the-point, but this one completely captured all my attention, and I was unable to stop reading. The characterization of both Tom and Harry is so well written, the plot is interesting, and their actions so realistic and good! I especially love how you write Tom, he's young, impulsive and temperamental, but clearly a human with feelings, and not a mindless evil-without-reason-villain. This story reminds me of the feelings I had when reading the last battle between Harry and Voldemort, where Harry calls him by his name, and offers redemption.

I hope you continue this story, I'm completely in love with it!
Sen2TOS9 4/10/12 . chapter 8
Oh my gosh! Dumbledore! He can see him?
non 4/2/12 . chapter 8
I keep going back and rereading this story. It's amazing. I love it. And desperately waiting for the next chapter or an update to your progress on your author's profile page. Please inform us that this is still ticking in the back of your mind.
MINTYFRESH D 3/10/12 . chapter 8
I know you stumble across fics with only four or seven chapters andd they have two hundred reviews already or the like, but I just wanted to say that despite the fact that this fic doesn't have as many reviews as proably the number of hits it gets, this is really, really good stuff, definetly up there with my favourite fics, so please, don't be discouraged from the lack of reviews, this is a great work of fanfiction, please keep writing it. I admire your talent. Keep chugging away with this fic.
treena-ivy-carter 2/20/12 . chapter 8
Interesting plot twist...

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BlueRedemption 2/12/12 . chapter 8
This story is amazing. Ive enjoyed the characterization of your characters, as well as their interaction. You've depicted Tom's (for the lack of better word) insanity rather well, and you've provided reasonable explanations as to the way he is. I'm very impressed and I'm really looking forward to more! It's very unlike all those other Tom/Harry docs I've come across!
Neko-chan -Silvered Tongue 2/5/12 . chapter 8
This is utterly fantastic! (And you are particularly evil for leaving off -right there.-)
Isys Skeeter 1/26/12 . chapter 8
good story, and i'm intrigued for more
AtrumMaximus 1/24/12 . chapter 8
So far, I'm very lost. The story confuses me like hell, but I'm just going to take the general quality of the story as reassurance that I will get an explanaition at some point xD I like it anyway. I think your characterization is very well done, though Imight not entirely agree with the way you do Harry. I can't see any solution to the problems, but I'll enjoy seeing him try. Thanks for the read, and I'll be looking very much forward to the next chapter. A cliffhanger, you evil person you!
BloodiedFangs 1/23/12 . chapter 8
i'm enjoying this story very much, its very well thought out and is written very well. Although i do find myself skipping to the harry/tom interaction/talking, i do like to read all the thoughts each of them do :)
My Solitude 1/18/12 . chapter 8
Interesting.
Hesunohana 1/14/12 . chapter 8
just extraordinary ! I LOVE it ! great idea ! the characters are perfect. just continue, please...
Allanasha ke kiri 1/12/12 . chapter 8
This is an exceedingly interesting take on things. Have to say that I love it. Both are just so deliciously in character, and that is a very rare thing to be able to do.

Can't wait for the next installment.
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