Please update your story; I really enjoy it.

Ummm... are you going to update? You said you might do so in less than a week but it's been a LOOONG time! 3/4 of a year, technically.

Please! I love this fic so much! It's so well-written... and well, awesome! I can't wait for the next update.

Update soon! P

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I am VERY impatient. Finish! Finish! Very good story so far.

PLEASE FINISH! IM STARVING! THIS IS SOO GOOOD!

Love it. Love it all. I hope you update soon

I want to know what happens next! Please update you do great 3 ninja stuff.

Umm... umm... /that/ was a little weird. Okay, I'll be honest with you: I don't really like it. But there's only reason: the romance. It was a little unnerving. Is there gonna be a lot in the next chapter? A lot of romance, I mean. And why would Jet go for her if she's so mean? Like, in the other chapters.

Soo... yeah. I can't wait 'till the action! Sorry if that was a little mean, but I'm just telling you the truth.

Keep writing,
LIR )

Oh life! How dare you stall the author from updating this awesomeness of a story? :(

Ooh! That rachel chick is soooo up to no good! I just know it! Well, actually, you pretty much WROTE that she's up to no good. lol But I like saying it. OOoh no good is Rachel!

lol too bad Jet is such a teenage boy when it comes to girls. Haha! That gave me a chuckle. "Girls, in general, are his weakness." Oh yes, definitely a teenage boy. XD

And Colt! I know he's looking out for his best friend by being suspicious of Rachel but he needs to be careful in how he does it if he doesn't wanna give the wrong impression to River or anyone else.

As has been shown already, misinterpretations happen. Unfortunately...

And lastly: coincidence? A date for tomorrow. A mysterious woman confirming someone's gonna do something tomorrow? COINCIDENCE? Hmm...

Aw man! Colt! Jet! Why'd ya gotta hold River back from opening a can of whoop-a**? :/

Aw! :)

Dude! This just made me dislike Rachel more! :(

But it made me love and appreciate Tum Tum more. Cuz though Rocky is the one that's calm under pressure and finds a solution to any problem he's presented, it's Tum Tum that gives the unexpected quips of wisdom almost unbecoming of someone his age that makes the brothers go "Wait. What?"

And again, River jumping to conclusions. *sigh* To be a teenage girl. It's the boy trouble in high school that I definitely don't miss about being a teenage girl. Hopefully River will learn that she needs to stop thinking that what she sees is exactly what it is when sometimes it isn't.

Off to the next chapter! :)

Oh! Rachel is one of them confident, persistent, won't/can't-take-no-for-an-answer type of b*tch huh? Urgh! I really don't like those! If you wanted me to dislike her mission accomplished! Grr! :(

On a lighter note. :) Have you been doing a bit of research *COUGHstalkingCOUGH* of the actor, Max Elliot Slade, that plays Colt? I only ask because you write that COlt can play a guitar and well, Max is a guitarist and has a band. Haden, I think it's called. How do I know that...? *looks away casually...*

Anyway! :D Great chapter! Off to the next! :)

I REFUSE to believe that Colt kissed this Stephanie chick back! There's NO WAY that he would do that to River or to himself. Colt is... he is... NOT THAT KINDA GUY. I think, River saw what she most feared rather than what was probably happening. It happens.

That's the problem with us girls sometimes. Once we see that another girl has eyes for our man we think the worst even when nothing's happened (yet or ever). Even when we voice our insecurity - in the most subtle way possible cuz we all know showing insecurity is not particularly attractive - to our man and he just shrugs it off we think the worst because we think "Pssh! If the tables were turned it'd be different. He'd be all up on the fool to back his shiz up!" But guys with girls always shrug off their girls cautions about other girls. It's annoying!

Anyway, I know an author doesn't introduce a new character by name and interaction for no reason. This Rachel chick is important (or not) to the plot you're setting up. I'm looking forward to finding out what.

P.S.
Gotta say that I've never liked the names Stephanie & Rachel for girls. For me PERSONALLY they come with a bad stigma to them already because in my PERSONAL experience Stephanies and Rachels are the worst. Guess we'll see right? (Sorry if that offended you or sounded horrible.)

Gotta say, when I read your first A/N and it said that this was going to be a Colt-centric fic I was immediately intrigued and excited. :D Colt is my favorite! He's always been my favorite. (He kinda reminds me of Raphael from the Ninja Turtles who is also my favorite. Are ya seeing a pattern here? ;P *blush*) With that said here's the rest of my review:

Aw! Colt and River broke up? :( Why? :( :(

And Jet turned to out to be his best friend (or one of since his brothers are most likely his best friends) that can't be a comfortable situation. :( Poor Jet will probably be stucj in a few crossfires. I know how that is and it's never fun. :(

Cute how excited Tum Tum is to be a freshman. High school can be so much fun but also so daunting. Not that Tum Tum would have too much problems in high school. I see him as so laid back and chill and fun and just go-with-the-flow. Wonder if he'll be taking Home Ec. you know, for cooking? He did seem like the one that made most of the meals at his Grandpa's cabin, no? LOL

Rocky is a senior huh? Sweetness! Bet he's quite the popular guy. Being all cool and collected and just and cute... ;)

And Colt? Well, he's probably the bad a** with the heart of gold that a lot of girls like. Which some might be happy to find he's single. Right?

LOL Check me out, predicting how the boys are in high school when I still have 6 chapters to read. Haha! XD

Alright alright, I'll end the review with this: the woman mentioned at the end. She's obviously something to Moretti. Wife? Daughter? Sister? Niece? Guess I'll find out. :)

The last time you update was last YEAR! Keep updating, okay? You've got a faithful reviewer right here. Yup, it's me. :)

Good humor you added there...very good. If there were more people that go to this archive, then you would have...about 30 reviews. That's how good your FanFiction is.

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