this was freaking funny. especially the part at the end about oliver crying and fainting. lol. Shmagin (spelling?)reminded me of a black precher which was funny :)

lol that is hilarious! That last part about Oliver crying and fainting is sooo funny! I was laughing like Charley Bates and that is something because I am definitely way more of a Dodger, the serious one that is.

I love this story so much! Hilarious! I love the part that says:

Oliver, being true to his character, was crying for no apparent reason and then fainted.

Oliver's really funny in this.

I actually got very scared at this-Bill Sikes? Being NICE? Wow. my favourite line was when Oliver was crying and fainted.

Flame? Are you kidding me? This was brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. The story was hilarious and extremely well written. If anything, you may want to make it a bit longer.

Flame? Are you kidding me? This was brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. The story was hilarious and extremely well written. If anything, you may want to make it a bit longer.

Oh my goodness that was the most hilarious thing I have read in yonks! I literally laughed out loud and in the quiet school libraray too! Your hilarity is inspiring - if I finish all my work this weekend I now hope to squish out an amusing ficlet related to either Pride & Prejudice, Oliver Twist or Shakespeare. One to ponder, that.

Thanks for the laughs my dear - this is a treasure. -goes to read again-

lol

This is cool

Everythings oposite

lol!

*rodger puts blanket over head*

Tell me when she's gone!

hahah

it was hard to imagine Nancy angry! Haha

there's no place like home...except Disney World...there's no place like Disney world either!

I almost spit out the water I was drinking when Oliver called himself "Rock." awesome, as usual.

Very creative. *L*

Makes one thing how the characters would have developed, when just a few things would have been different.

Artful-Jackdaw

THIS. JUST...THIS.

IT'S HILARIOUS!

I love Shy!Dodger and Gentle!Sykes. It's so cute! And Nancy...er...Lancey...is really mean! Which confuses me, because I'm so used to writing fics where she cries/dies/is sad, so it's really different! BUT I LIKE IT. :D

Lol! I actually really liked this! And im not just saying that! Are you planning any more? It would've been funny to see Charley in reverse. Maybe all grumpy? You did a good job on reversing Bill and dodger's character. Could dodger be clumsy instead of artful? I liked how charley kept thinking everyone else had hit their heads when it was really him :) nice work!

So good! I loved it, keep writing, my friend.

Delightful twist! I was more shocked with this parallel with every sentence I read ( D-Rodger? Wot WAS that? Terrifying experience!) but enticing and hilarious! Clever title as well. . .