Not many people watched HawthoRNe when it was on, but I fell in love with it the first second of the episode. I remember this episode, and even though it was quite different,I liked this version a lot. Nice work.

beautifully written! you definitely need to add to this. i just recently got into Hawthorne (just a few days). The big draw? Nick. Initially it was Tom but Nick just has something more. I'm loving the drama he brings. I'm discovering that long time fans are a little peeved about his presence. But i say bring it on! anyways, your story is very believable and true to christina's internal struggle. you should write more.

Loved it! I can't wait to read more! Tuesday's episode was great! I'm so tired of people complaining it's just a tv show. Thanks for this! Can't wait for more :)