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FeatherBerry 1/24/12 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I have never laughed so hard at a fanfic in my life. Thank you so much for writing a hilarious Barret too, definitely don't see him written very often. Thanks for your hard work! I see myself visiting this story innumerable times in the future, when I'm in need of a laugh.
The Genesis Awards 1/3/12 . chapter 1
I am extraordinarily pleased to inform you that your story, Enchantment Nights, has been nominated for The Genesis Awards Best Humour Category for the 2012 Season. The Genesis Awards exists to reward the authors of FFVII fanfiction that show a certain standard of grammar and formatting, relevance to canon and characterization. Your story was nominated by PenAgainstSword at The Genesis Awards forums. The nominations will be open until December 31 and the nominated stories will be assessed from January 1-February 15th, 2013, by preliminary readers. Further details will be present on The Genesis Awards website at a later date.

If you have any questions or comments, please visit our Fan Fiction Net Profile or The Genesis Awards forum.

Congratulations,

Sai,

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The Genesis Awards
silenthero27 12/22/11 . chapter 1
Although I'm not a fan of the pairing but boy they're hilarious! The obscenities might turned me off a bit but hey there's Cid so might as well go with it.

In the story, I thought Vincent would first choose the moggle story game, being it very lame for Vincent and 'cute' for Yuffie. But Yuffie tries to coerce Vincent to play the motorcycle game instead to test his riding skills (which, in fact, is very horrible). I wonder why Cloud didn't showed up here at least once - to share his 'unpleasant' experience in his participation in a 'play'.

Overall, I liked it. Their thoughts make it one fabulous comedic story. Kudos for your next stories.
Metalmark 12/13/11 . chapter 1
I just about died laughing reading this. Hilarious!

...

**"DO YOU SEE WHAT HAPPENS?" he hooted. "DO YOU SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU MESS WITH THE WARRIOR?"

Vincent thought fondly about what would happen if he put his gun in his mouth and pulled the trigger. It would be so peaceful.**

...

Oh dear Lord, these lines are full of epic win. Seriously.

Ah, no matter how many times I read this, each and every time I laugh. I’m not even a huge shipper of the pairing but I enjoy it immensely nonetheless. Your characterization, lines and the way the story is told are simply mazing. (:

Thanks for the lovely read!
A Flame's Embers 11/22/11 . chapter 1
You made me like this pairing. Damn! I swore to myself that I'd never like this pairing! :'(
Kuro Chocobo 11/7/11 . chapter 1
Nice to see you writing FFVII again. This was a fun read. Hope you decide to pop back in more often.
xxfatal 8/1/11 . chapter 1
Well, you can consider me thoroughly enchanted by this piece. I love pieces that show some interaction between Barret and Yuffie. They're a hoot when slapped together.

And, that Yuffie. Sure had him fooled.

In short, I loved it. To bits.
Raug'moss 7/25/11 . chapter 1
That was pretty funny. Good job!
sabacat 7/24/11 . chapter 1
SWEEEET! Vincent's thoughts were hilarious! And Yuffie was just so VERY Yuffie! I giggled the whole way through!
brightbird 7/23/11 . chapter 1
This is very good! You did a great job staying true to the characters without hitting readers over the head (Barrett's gruffness, Yuffie's hyperactivity, Vincent's moodiness, were all present but not exaggerated). A well-thought-plot with action building up to a crisis and a believable solution, plus a nice tie-up of the details at the end. I liked this!
PrincessofBadLuck 7/23/11 . chapter 1
This was great! I think I've seen your stories before and it's been so enjoyable to read such wonderful work. Thank you for your time and this funny piece. I loved their dialouge the most.
Pen Against Sword 7/23/11 . chapter 1
I was attempting, quite innocently, to drink a glass of milk when I came across this line: "Vincent wondered if there was a square in the Gold Saucer where they performed assisted suicides."

Milk doesn't taste as good through your nose as it does through your mouth, I have concluded.

On a more serious note, this is a fantastic little read, and I think beyond how funny your Vincent and your Yuffie are, it was your Barret I liked the most. Sometimes I forget just how outrageous he can be ("You're late, bitch!") until I read a fic like this one.

Good show, and I'm glad you're not entirely on hiatus. I'm sure your original work is going just as well as your fanfiction, though ;D
FreezingCold 7/23/11 . chapter 1
Oh, man, this was a really fun story to read. Looking at the prompt, I was afraid it'd be fluffy. And Vincent does not do fluff. But no, it was right on. Your Barrett was awesome. The way he tinks is so... idiotic, to quote Vince. I'm still laughing.

I hope you'll write more OS. I've always loved the way you handle Vincent.
Tequila Man 7/23/11 . chapter 1
Hehe, so spot on. Do you play FF7 in your sleep, M?
Sylla 7/23/11 . chapter 1
Oh, Vincent. Oh, *Yuffie*. It's like they can never do anything without it going horribly, unexpectedly wrong.

I liked... well, pretty much everything about this oneshot, obviously, but I *particularly* liked how the mood changes from awkward to horrifying to actually pleasant. It felt very natural. As always, your Vincent is brilliant. (Second only to your Auron. Now go write an Auron oneshot. :P )
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