Great fic there! Just like you, it bothered me how the heart-problem thing was just forgotten about as soon as they met that simulant; let alone that leaving the guys to die a rather certain death seemed a bit too selfish - even for Rimmer (IMO).

Your fic makes much more sense in these regards, and I definitely enjoyed the read. Thank you a lot for writing and sharing. TK

Loved it - you did well making it comparable to the actual episode but making it so different and gripping!

Wedge

awesome story

:P

You know I have to say I prefer your version over the actual TV episode you fixed the things that always bugged me about it. Great job!

That was an excellent version of that episode, definitely better than the one that got aired. I agree with you, Rimmerworld was a weak premise, and the whole ep, especially when they finally got to Rimmerworld, seemed a bit rushed.

I love your writing, you've got all the characters personalities spot on. I'd love to see what you could do with other eps.

Just a quick question...how many times did you have to watch the ep to get all the dialogue down?

Awesome! I like the ending. I wished it didn't have that Rimmerworld Feel to it. Like the Teleporter and Program exiting being the same thing. I did like the ending though. T-Ball. And I like how Cat just let Lister get the smeg beaten out him.

Oh my god. This is awesome. Make more please! Also I want to ass that this works well if you read t while listening to the Rimmer Munchkin Song. ****-5 Stars

make it stop, poor Rimmsy *cries*