How hard was it to copy and paste this? Make your own story and don't steal. you official broke a law

Good one-shot. Very realistic. Very in character. If anything, I think it might be a good idea to change Jack's name, seeing as he and Dodger share the same first name. You also might want to make it a bit longer, although it works at this length as well. Still, overall, good job.

I've always loved the Dodger, this was really good x

Aww,I love Dodger. Good job. Tip: you may get more reveiws if you put this story under the "musicals" section...

You're so good.

No,its Dawkins,says so in the book.

uuumm its Jack Hawkins, not Dawkins and you kinda make it sound Dodger and Jack are seperate people when, Dodgers real name is Jack Hawkins

That was a nice story, keep up the good work

-wr