|Reviews for Heterochromia|
| cking1996 2/25/13 . chapter 12
do a sequel plaese
| Spindash77 8/4/12 . chapter 12
Okay now that the storie is finally over I think now would be a good time to give my thoughts on it.
I generally really liked how you made it more about the character and his development than the some whole save the world cliche you see in most fics like main problem with the fic however is that the characters aren't to good, for starters Aarons whole anti-Heterchromia thing got really annoying when he kept whining about it when literaly everyone (Even Eggman the freakin villian) tells him that they look nice but at east at the end he admits he was being a complete idiot about it. Then there's Sebby who gets one little insult from Aaron and then he decides Aarons the biggest jerk on the planet, that he dosn't deserve to have friends, and that it would be better to die than be saved by Aaron. Plus the whole point of veiw switching wasn't really neccesary especially since this is supposed to be Aarons story maybe switching to Sebby every now and then would be okay but when you switch to Sonic when Aaron realizes he's been transformed or switching to shadow for no real reason it can kinda detract from the story. Despite its flaws it is a generally fresh take on the whole "human to mobian" type of story and I did like it okay.
| WhiteWinterStar 8/4/12 . chapter 12
Think into that sequel, huh? Aaron and the gang could go to Sebby's graduation...and chaos ensues.
| Heart of PureSilver 8/4/12 . chapter 11
Kyaaaaah! Take that, Eggbutt! That'll teach ya not to mess with Aaron Skyhart! Its nice to see that he's finally gotten over his hatred of his eyes. Only one chappie left before it's over, huh? Dang. All good things must come to an end. Hey, just a thought. For your next story(whenever you get inspiration), why not challenge yourself and try writing in 3rd person PoV instead of 1st person? That'd be interesting to see. Of course, you don't have to if you don't want to. I wonder what the huge climax will be like? Update again soon. :D
| WhiteWinterStar 8/4/12 . chapter 11
Aww, it's over? -_-
Sequel, maybe? I can see Sebby turning into a creature...I think he would be blue. You could go deeper into why Aaron's a fox and such.
| WhiteWinterStar 7/17/12 . chapter 10
Well. I never expected to hear Shadow say 'beautiful'.
But I thought you were gone forevers! Yay! You live!
And now it's time to SAVE SEBBY!
| Sgt. Creeper 1/12/12 . chapter 9
| WhiteWinterStar 10/2/11 . chapter 9
The tail thing...that's so Aaron. I loved it!
And they're off to save the Sebby! Huzzah!
| GhostSniper907 10/1/11 . chapter 9
Yay! Update! And yeah, high school's a b!tch, ain't it?
| jakeroo123 10/1/11 . chapter 9
... Okay, I'm reviewing.
... I HAVE WRITTEN FANFIC! GO READ!
Just kidding... Well, I actually have written a fanfic, and I would like feedback on it. But I'm not going to force you to read it by talking in all caps.
| Macabre Kaiser 10/1/11 . chapter 9
Good chap. A little short, but the story is coming along either way, hopefully you can break this writer's block.
I'm still in the middle of a writer's block myself...and an art block. DX
| WhiteWinterStar 8/30/11 . chapter 8
Hmm, so Eggy's been spying, huh? Well, plot twists!
I didn't think Aaron would get so mad, but then again he is your character. Maybe you could have taken it slower. Adn I don't thik he would be saying 'Sebby' while having a full-blown rant/
Hmm...Obviously, the others are going to go to Aaron, Sonic, Tails, and the rest of them. Aaron will be hesitant, but they'll go...
and while that's happening Eggy's either torturing Sebby or trying to make im turn traitor. When they find him, he either doesn't want to be rescued by Aaron because of that, or Sebastian goes and attacks them for some twisted form of revenge...
But that's just what I think.
| GhostSniper907 8/29/11 . chapter 8
Yay! You updated! :D Short, but still an update! Can't wait til the next one! Just make sure to balance your updates between this and Keystone. That's my only real concern here.
| AndromedaAI 8/2/11 . chapter 7
Wow! So awesome!
| WhiteWinterStar 8/2/11 . chapter 7
Hmm..So, s bit of foreshadowing about a future attack with Eggy?
I didn't like the sentence where Sebastian was telling Sam about 'Aaron' and the eyes. Try not to say I so much