Awww poor Phoebus and Qausi.
I love the niece and nephew. So cute with them interacting with their uncle.

Okay, first off I have to say that you should not be embarrassed by these chapters! They are amazing! I already love Melenie. She really does care for her friend and wants the best for Esme. Also I love how Quasi still has feelings for Esmeralda because really she was his first love and it's hard to lose those feelings for someone who didn't return them back in the way he wanted. It's also really cute how he accepts her as his sister figure and how he has a new perspective of Phoebus. Thumbs up for giving more depth to Phoebus character. I have always loved him (the Disney version! lol) but now I I find it possible to love him even more! Esmeralda and him are definitely meant to be together. I look forward to seeing more cute moments with them and also with their adorable hunchback friend. :)

this is amazing! PLEASE finish this! 3

Please, Please, Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens!

Beautiful and gripping story. I am loving it!

DAMMIT Phoebus, why couldn't you have been patient! Excellent as always, although I do take issue with Phoebus's comparison of Quasi to Frollo. I don't know if you wrote it that way intentionally to show how desperate he was but it still comes off as jarring, especially considering how the Court of Miracles ambush played out, simply because Phoebus jumped the gun and convinced Quasi to follow him.

On a good note, I love how you're giving Quasimodo a 3 dimensional character: the envy and selfishness combined with his kindness makes for a very interesting read. Keep up the good work!

*runs over and hugs Quasi*

Your writing is awesome!

Aww.. poor Quasimodo and Minerva!

This story is Great! Please update soon!

plzzzzz update :)

Aww, poor Quasi! Just when he gets over Esmerelda, he falls in love once again only to find out that she is a wanted criminal. When will this juicy scandalous story end?

If anything, I'd like to see some more Frollo. Our villain doesn't like to be kept waiting in the background! Alas, about your explanation for Quasi staying in the cathedral, I could see how his shy personality would make him claustrophobic. Well done! Besides, who better than Quasimodo can Paris rely on to wake them up in the morning?

I must say, this story is absolutely FANTASTIC. It's one of the few good ones in this fandom, and, I think this goes without saying: I hope you update soon. I also really like Minerva's character, she's a great addition to HoND! Good job!

This story is soooo cute! I hope you keep up with it...Quasi deserves some love! 3

What a great story, I am loving it so far. I hope you decide to finish it, because I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

Poor Minerva