I meant to post this in the next chapter but haven't posted a review in a while and I am not used to the new format. I am enjoying this story it is being told well with some nice insight into minor and forgotten characters. You need to really check your spelling. In Chapter 11, you are constantly changing Violet's name to Violate, which implies a much different thing altogether. Also, the way your story reads, you have Petunia marrying her half-brother, a rather twisted way of having everyone related to one another. Please try to keep the grammer and spelling straight and your story will turn out great.

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ULP! Violet's in twouble... :-P

I am liking this story very much. I am just finding a little annoying so many family secrets and nobody really knowing anything, or if they do, its only in small parts.

Hope to see more soon.

likes the web you weave, keepu p the good work, byes

please update soon this is good

I must say I am disliking the massive changes to the story , the time line jumps and the fact that stuff gets cut out and moved aound,

I honestly like the premise of the story. It's very unique but it is hard to enjoy the story with the mistakes in it. There are many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes in the story. Also, some parts of the text are repeated twice with no explanation. Another problem is that the construction of the plot and what you are trying to say is very unclear. It would improve IMMENSELY if you edited it or had someone else look at. it would make it a lot more enjoyable. Right now, it is hard to get through the text because of all the spelling mistakes. This has the potential to be good, it just needs some editing.

Well I am done with this story. Not only do the constant
changes in year piss me off, but I want to kill that little
b&tch Violet.
I have never read a story whre I hated a character as nuch
as I do her.

If Dudley is such a sad loser that he won't drag his
B&ch of an ex into court because he doesn't want to
upset his kids, he doesn't deserve them in the first
place.

Good Chapter, keep up the good work ,bye

Oh how I yearn for another chapter. I love this story!

please update this is good

Wow...this is one of the few fanfictions which are not only well written, but also have a pretty creative approach. My only "complain" is that I really don't see the Molly leaving the burrow, ever (after all, she needs space so that her whole family can come to visit, and that she can take care of as many people as possible), and that I was confused because it first seemed as if Violet doesn't tell her father because she thinks he wouldn't believe her...but she actually doesn't because she is afraid how he will react? But she treats him badly all the times? I'm not sure I get that...I also doubt that the treatment Harry got from the Dursleys is common knowledge in the wizard world...and wouldn't another blood connection helpful, to make her less "muggleborn"?

this story really has a great plot, continue the good work !.
But hasn't this chapter been posted before? and it seems another one has been you changing some facts ?.