I find it's sort of hard to find an interesting Earthbound fanfic. Your fanfic is actually very good. I started it and didn't stop until I read up to the last chapter which is something I don't normally do unless I read a good story. If you're continuing this then I can't wait until the next chapter!

Obsession,

Keep up the pressure!

Please update i love it

yay! that was strange. ninten got his PSI back. wha happened to him using the 4th D slip thingie?

i love this story. very fast, funny story. I. NEED. MOAR!

Ahaha... I can imagine what Jeff had in mind about the future, but sadly, he's not going to see it for a loooong time.
Great chapter, and I hope to see more of the villain next chapter.

The heart of Luke Lynch is also filled with Christmas joy, even though it's a week late. I lol'ed all the way through the Christmas chapters, and the Eight Melodies was perfect to close it out. Keep it going.

Yeah, Lucas totally doesn't need Christmas explained to him, all he needs is to see it in action. And I'm trying not to think about the new Earthbound development, because my hopes aren't so likely to be shattered. (is saying that but is hopeful anyway.

Oh Ninten. I love how his plan to get onto Santa's nice list is backfiring so very much. And how Ness reacted to the flashbacks. Can't wait for the next part!

lol Kumatora's predicament.

As to your answer to my previous review, I only made mention of the crush because it had been advertised in the summary early on in the story's development. Like I said: Curious, is all.

Anyways, loving where the story's going. Watch for the occasional spelling mistake and you should be golden.

Yay, an update! Jeff is awesome, and I loved Kumatora's reaction and her last line just induced maniacal cackling.

Looking forward to the next part.

Ahaha yes I guess no matter how many weird things you have seen in your life, Mr. Saturns would still be 'weird' when you first see them.
As for my name, however, it doesn't really have a meaning, but it does have some sort of origin. Long story short though, I just needed a pen name. )
There were a few mistakes here, but a particular one:
"What the hell? Pk Freee Omega!"...
It... was funny when I first read it though. Then after reading the descriptin I realised it was supposed to be PK Freeze...
Other than that, cool chapter. )
Wonder how Christmas Special is going to be like...
-Negai Liu

Sorry I've not reviewed or beta'd for you for a while. I see you've been busy. Love what I'm seeing thus far. I just have to ask, what pairings are you planning for this story, if any? Only because I made mention that Lucas has a crush on Kumatora back when I beta'd Chapter 4, and nothing else has come of it. Curious, is all. Keep writing, and I'll do my damnedest to keep reading.

Good job! You have done an excellent job for this story, and I urge you to keep going! This is an excellent example of a story that doesn't take itself too seriously, but that's a good thing! Love it!

And here I would have thought Ninten would be used to seeing all these weird things, but then again, Mr. Saturns are strange creatures. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this chapter, and it's interesting to how Pippi's story will tie in (if it will).
-Negai Liu
P.S. A sound similar to a pig squeal... now why does that sound so much like a certain someone? :3